Uhhhg, sorry I gotta do this to ya man.
I’m not gonna count being too short as 1 of the problems, so don’t worry about that.
For one, the drum beats sometimes go a bit off key, almost as if your trying to pull it back to its original spot. The melody is hella unsightreadable, like I didn’t know what was coming. Finally was also the kicks at the end, they were a bit too punchy to make something chill.
I get this is a song you probably spent no effort on, we all got those songs, in fact, it reminds me of this @Trevor8 song
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1189848
I do like the idea! I see a picture beyond this, it’s just a little out of order and they don’t have the pieces together too well.