Well to top this off, I like the intro, and the voxy voice at the start of the song as well. I also like how this one is less repetitive then the last one, though this one still has a few issues. When I first listened, the snares were far too loud and needed some form of attack or even just turning down the volume of the snares as well. The strings are also a bit too loud as well, that really surprised me when the strings came in at 0:58.
The only thing here you gotta work on really is the mixing of the various instruments you used. It has the right atmosphere, good melody, and the drums are epic, I’m also a fan of the exit, that’s probably the most gangsta exit you could get.
Good job! A lot better than the last one, just needs some tweaking in the mixing!