Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[T70] Cybernetic Melody]

Ok! So you do know how to make better melodies… XD. The drum loop could be a bit less choppy in the beginning, and of course their are some mixing problems, too much repetitiveness and such, but all it really takes is practice!

Tr1ck70 responds:

Thanks for the feedback c:

A lot of these songs were rushed, I made them all in around 3 months... not nearly enough time to produce 8 fully complete songs. Funny story, most of them were made at school with some garageband plugins as the school used Mac pc's.

I've recently moved on to FL studio 21 as I main windows at home, and I'm learning it with help from Shulkern, another small producer here on NG. Thx bro :)

[[T70] Tough Luck]

All it takes is practice, we definitely need some better melodies, maybe find a certain key that works for you, since the piano is way off key. Many of the sfx are too loud, such as 0:46. At 0:54 that does have a sort of melody, even if it is off a little. I’d also try and add a drum loop of some sort. If I were to name all the advice I’d give to improve this, you’d probably end up more confused then with knowledge.
If you really want to get good advice, I’d recommend checking in with someone known as @Taintedlogic, you just gotta be willing to take his criticism as just that, rather than as insults. He can be a bit harsh, but his critiques have definitely helped me in the past few years!
But the main part is to keep practicing, practice making melodies, practicing new things, and just not giving cause something doesn’t work.

Tr1ck70 responds:

Thanks for feedback! As the description says, this was definitely meant to be the curtain-closer to this album/ep, but it definitely could have been better, like you said with volume control on sfx and piano being off key and seperate tempos.

[Dreamsong (Descent Mix)]

Super epic! Thanks ShangXian for introducing me to you!

SHE-RE responds:

Thank you, and thank you @ShangXian for recommending me!

[Frostwalkers]

Very soothing man! Not bad! I seriously like this! The name is also pretty authentic as well!

[Cave Robot]

Noice work!

First FP! CONGRATS!

[Icebreaker]

Me when I engage in small talk with someone else and break the ice

[Above The Abyss]

G2961: Aight cool, frontpage #69420! Sick!

[petricore]

Definitely a walking to class kind of song.

the transition to the drums is a little odd, but its pretty eat. Dusty drums are probably some of my favorites, so I really love this, along with the cute bell melody, a sad yet mysterious melody. Another odd transition into true lofi judging by the turning on of a record. The instrument with the rain is very sweet to the soul, and soon with the bell along with it is a lullaby tune that could put even the most loud and annoying babies to sleep! The bass is one of my favorites here, somehow the bass you used just perfectly fits and I love that! Another still odd transition later and we got another drum beat.
The secondary bell is sweet to the ears, and sounds heavenly, it feels oddly nostalgic, and definitely going to class on a cloudy day. And the final piano melody hits, and it ends the song! BEAUTIFUL!
Mixing is really straight forward, not too much of anything, it’s just a chill song!

Instrumentation: 4.5/5
Mix: 4.5/5
Atmosphere: 5/5
Melody: 5/5
Transitions: 2.5/5

Good work! 4.2 stars! I hope you keep it up! This is some really good stuff!

[snippet]

I love the bass on this! Good work!