Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Hurt Me 90s Style]

Impressive on how you made this in GarageBand! Great job!

So fuck you! And have these 5 stars!

[Mouthful!]

Disgusting as hell…

I love it! For some reason it’s oddly catchy! I ate seasoned crickets once, it’s mainly the fact that your eating bugs that’s disgusting, not the big itself lol

[Liftoff]

A bit too much volume and a lack of mixing, used to make that mistake when I first got into music. I love the melodies before it got low quality at 0:40, only the snares that lead to said part could use some work. I’m especially fond of the bass, I use that bass in my own songs a lot as well :D. It’s important to level your instruments and drums, you want it to be as loud as possible, but not so loud to where it’s impossible to listen to. I love the bass and the chiptune melody tho. Only the drums could use more variety, a less hard hitting snare, and of course, the mixing.

People give FL Mobile a bad rep due to it being so limited, but I tell you this, I have shocked many people with the fact my songs are actually made in Fl mobile… and I know you can too ;) just keep practicing man!

KOEGD responds:

thanks; i am still somewhat new at fl studio mobile so i didnt know much about mixing until your comment
glad you still liked it though :)

[Disease To The Mind]

Not bad! Not bad at all, just needs some better mixing, I love the melodies you used to make this, and I can hear the old ng style of music with the snares and the bass! Strings could use some reverb and better EQ, and cymbals could be a tad bit quieter. It’s also a bit repetitive in some areas, but other than those minor problems, this is really well made! The only big problem is the mixing, mainly where the cymbals are used. Good work man!

TheGoodDonol responds:

Hey thanks, man! Unfortunately, I used the free trial version of FL Studio to make this, so I really can't go back to my project. I could try remaking the entire thing from scratch if I have the time.

[Banana (Official Audio)]

Interesting drum use, the drums are pretty well made, it’s just the melodies don’t exactly collide well with eachother, and the volume of the instruments are varied, I’d recommend working on your volume leveling and trying to find a melody that fits the drum beat, though you may need to make the snare louder rather then repeat it, honestly, the entirety of the drums could have a higher volume. I’m guessing you’re new to music, so I guess it makes sense, you can definitely make something good, you just gotta practice more and experiment with new things.

[Step by step]

I’d recommend making the piano more on key, it’s also doesn’t have any good transitioning and all the instruments are just horribly tuned.

I’m guessing your new to music? If so, I’ll tell you this… ITS BETTER THEN MY FIRST XD! Unlike my first this actually has a rhythm, a catchy rhythm actually, it just wasn’t put in the best way since you’re still new. Just keep practicing!

DanirplayGD responds:

Thank you. I'm really new to music, and I'm making a second track. Thanks for the feedback, even if it's not positive.

[8Studios - Blessed]

Yep, definitely got first song vibes, very similar to my first one as well lol.

[iamwizard! - silly gose car takeover (Pawncast OST)]

Some beats could be added in to make the song flow better, and some parts have a stop to it if that makes sense. But it is a pretty good vibe! I’m also a fan of the guitar at the start, tho it could be turned down or filtered better to make it fit in a little more. Overall conclusion, it’s one of those songs you just vibe too, like bg music for a stream!

Cute cat pic too!

iamwizard responds:

loosh is a cool cat!
im really not all that proud of this one, i made it one one of those days where you get a ton of musicians block. i mashed random crap together and made it almost work. im glad you like it, and ill definitely take what youve said into account next time. thanks for the compliments!!
- wizar