Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Voices In The Wind]

The song is really great! The lyrics are made very well! Some parts are a bit too panned to one side, but it’s really Neato! Good work!

MyosoGardens responds:

I see! Thank you so much <3

[Contrary]

Really good work dude! I like the variety of instruments! It’s not like any normal synthwave, it’s much more varied in both pitch and tone, I love it!

[Slash Inferno]

How much orchestral do you want wit this one?

Waterflame: A ton! But also none at all!

Nice work lol

[Digital Flowers]

Deserved frontpage fr!

I love orchestra and electronic together, it’s really well made, some very minor flaws, (and when I say very minor, I mean so minor it’s not even important, or hell, even noticeable), it’s super well done! Great job man! Thank you for the digital flowers, here’s some for you as well! <3
https://www.google.com/search?client=safari&sca_esv=f712e055a0066755&hl=en-us&sxsrf=ADLYWIKpg-VYoNFuxLNn57Gofcp9LvQang:1734075404802&q=flower&udm=2&fbs=AEQNm0Aa4sjWe7Rqy32pFwRj0UkWd8nbOJfsBGGB5IQQO6L3J03RPjGV0MznOJ6Likin94pT_oR1DTSof42bOBxoTNxGn2ehXJBTLY_WkWTkcxqmW2BGYVPqVGmtfFZ0daHhBzeVSX-c_njmWXyGpiQy-aJCoRvKCp-0UIMMWIkiaFcNCvR6-KtWvmHDour6OaGvfQuGEeZAb9Z6afCPgpQYoGwflpapWQ&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiniJGknqSKAxXsKEQIHWOvGhsQtKgLegQIGRAB

A145 responds:

Thank you so much!

(also thank you for the flowers! its pretty <3)

[Great North Road]

Non Canon lyrics :D

Won’t you walk with me?
On this lonely road
Great North Road
Where our dreams go
To fade, away (fade away, fade away)
I say, we stay, awhile
Get our energy
then move on once more
Don’t you agree with me
Oh,Wouldn’t you agree with me
Or perhaps, your looking for
Something more exciting
An adventure is always ahead of you after all

The great north road
May only go north
But you still gotta learn the direction
Never know where your going
And never know how your gonna get there
So won’t you walk with me
Along this lonely road
Cause with you its not so lonely anymore

(Instrumental till 1:21)

Saddest times, come friends
And friends, come better times
No matter what, I’ll still stay with you
Looking up at the moon with you
Walking along, this lonely road
Cause with you its not so lonely anymore (Cause with you)

Cause with you its not so lonely anymore

On the, Great North Road
Just gotta keep going forth
I know you can make it
Just hold on to my hand, I’ll lead you to our destination

(instrumental till 2:19)

Not so lonely anymore

Cause with you its not so lonely anymore

On the, Great North Road
Just gotta keeping holding on
To yourself, and the ones you love
Cause this ain’t as lonely anymore

Keep forth

[Connection [Wired]]

Though im not a huge fan of Breakcore, I used to be, then I just kept hearing it everywhere and just started disliking it, so I’m gonna judge everything else BUT the Breakcore, since I know some love Breakcore.

The voice acting/samples are really nice and fit well with the song, I like the use of the phaser of the samples as well, the transition to the breakbeat part could be a little less sudden… I am judging the transition to the Breakcore, not the Breakcore in general. Piano is really cinematic, which is perfect for this kind of track. It also seems to speed up rather suddenly, which imo is jarring.

My favorite part of all is definitely the beginning, and is the kind of drum n bass I’m into, the distorted bass is super cool and fits well as an introduction!

Conclusion: Really good song, just a bit jarring at parts, and transitions could be a bit better. Hope you keep it up! Also, the mention of suicide is a sort of adult topic, do you think you should change this to T age rating?

Btw, congrats on the frontpage!

Mykoll responds:

Thanks for the feedback. You're probably right about the suicide thing, Changing it now.

[The Boss o' The Mob]

A few things could be better, but they are so inconvenient they aren’t even worth mentioning, this is some serious good work! It reminds me of an opening cut scene to a boss, and in my head I am imagining a rat going up against a huge brute pig, who uses scraps from the dumpster as weapons and armor. Really Neato Luigi! Keepitup!

[Velocity]

Oh now it gets frontpaged!? 😂

[Breathe]

Not bad! Not bad at all! Though it could obviously use some tweaks, especially at the start.

The start had a off rhythm piano that sounded really weird, and the transition to the bass with the zap part could be much improved, and the percussion instruments that transition to the synth part could also be rearranged to a point where it goes with the melody, a good way to do this is to make a 4 to the 4 beat with the percussion, and then arrange them until you get a perfect sound. The zaps could also have a lower volume, it would make it fit more into the song. Other than the first part with the piano and all the other stuff, it sounds pretty neat! It especially reminds me of Minecraft music for some reason, and I like that. The bass and kicks sound really good and fit really well with the entire song the whole way through, except for the beginning where they could have a lower velocity. Good job! Keep it up!