Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pry - Starvoyage]

Not bad man! Not bad!

Some synths sound a little bit weird, but that’s really the only problem with the song, it could also be less padded on some of the drums.

Good work!

PryArts responds:

Appreciate the feedback, Creeper :)) I'll assure you the song will be better once the WIP is removed from the title

[Winter Waltz]

Amazing work rad Tunez! Merry Christmas!

[enter slaughterhouse]

Transitions could be a little better, even a simple rising cymbal could work wonders. It also sounds off tune in some areas of the song, explicitly the end. It’s also extremely minimal, though it seems to pull it off well. Transitions between melodies could be improved, and the melodies could be backed with a slight synth or bass melody, to make the bell melody stand out a bit more. It also has a standard rave vibe oddly similar to DirtyPaws song Blood, or at least in my opinion.

On the other hand, the melodies are real spooky and atmospheric, a good amount of reverb went into this piece! The basses are also pretty well made, and the drums fit oddly well with the dark theme, in which normally you’d use drums not as bitcrushed. Good work! Keep going!

[Leaving]

Really fitting vocals and a very emotional song, especially at the oooo parts. I guess the only thing about the song is that it could use more variety.

For a first song both wrote, produced, and sang by you, this is seriously impressive, it sounds very good, everything is well and clear, even a minimal at times, which in this case is something good! Amazing work my friend, keep it up!

Yokuofficial responds:

Very good feedback! Thank you for the kind words!

[Arcade Fever]

Doesn’t really sound like drum n bass, more like a good video game track! But it’s not the genre, it’s whether it’s sick, and lemme tell you… it’s pretty sick!

The only problems I see are the snare transitions… they just don’t sound right, and that’s all that it is, next is the video game vocals, you’d probably need to make them more distorted to suit the vibe of the song, plus just like the snares, it just doesn’t sound right, especially “Game, not over”, although this is a motivating line, it also disrupts the flow, I’d recommend saying “It’s not over yet” instead as a sample, this way it flows much more smoothly.

But on the other hand, the melodies are very classic, yet they also sound familiar! In fact, this entire song reminds me of MDK’s style, without the “Wubstep” as he calls it. You put this in front of me and not tell me who it is, I would’ve probably said MDK. I like how clear all the instruments are and can be heard, from the bass to the pad. The cute chiptune melody arpeggios at the start and end really fit in with making both an outro and intro.

Conclusion, really good piece, it’s just some parts could be improved, as all songs could be! Amazing work, and remember “it’s not over yet” ;)

Edit: the sample parts, it’s not your fault, although it still doesn’t fit, it still just doesn’t flow right, just pointing out a mistake I made, since you didn’t make the samples yourself. Forgive me for my tom foolery. And thank you @nimblegend for the comment, I would have never found out about the mistake I made lol.

TenodiBoris responds:

Thank you for this detailed and elaborative feedback,thats what we(artists) need, rarely people LISTEN to a song nowadays and have time or will to experience it or try to understand what the artist did or wanted to do. Music is unique way to transfer emotion from artist to listener and having someone on other end makes me really really happy. Thank you,cheers!

[Rising stakes]

Dude, the steaks are rising!

Great! Now the barbecue is ruined!

[greem]

I’m greem too! :3

ConnorGrail responds:

No way.... I thought i was the only one......

[Puzzled - Sci-Jewel OST]

Openmpt… hmmm, never heard of it! Sounds cool!

I like the orchestra hits, and arp in the background is really sick to listen to! And the whole song just flows together well! This is definitely more into the video game genre then synthwave, but this sounds amazing either wise.

The acid basses sound awesome, and the lead is familiar, but I dunno from where! Good work bro! Keep it up!

Cheeming-Bepis responds:

Tysm! :]
It’s a very old program that a lot of 2000’s games used.

[Distant Skyline]

Cool stuff! I like the sky/space feel! Don’t overwork yourself, ok ;)

Good luck with the rest of December!

[BREAK CHEKQUE]

Break check *explodes for no fuckin reason*