Congrats mate! You just proved I suck at music! :D
Either way, beautiful song, I love the way it sounds! It’s definitely real chill!
Amazing work, and btw, I use the same daw, and I barely ever get frontpaged, I have a feeling more frontpages are coming to you soon <3 good luck my friend!
You don't suck its just a learning thing. I thought I could never make good music with fl mobile but what helped was learning to EQ everything properly. Thanks for the kind words.
Ay good work on the frontpage! Sorry for responding so late
Very minimal, but also pretty! You’ve most definitely improved from last I talked to you! It’s a bit repetitive, and the hook at 1:39 is also a bit awkward. But I can tell you tried to to make it less repetitive by adding slightly different side melodies along with the main melody. At 2:27, the chiptune there could’ve been a little bit more on beat, I dunno, it just sounded a bit off, but I won’t mark you down too much for it.
Conclusion, you improved! Amazing work dude, keep it up! And do you use compressors, those could add a lot to your song, I learned how to use it by @Skankymojo, his advice helped a shit ton!
Yooooo this is sick D)
@skilledfella bro can see music 💀💀💀🙏
Pretty nice mate! I really like the hardstyle parts and most of the parts that can be improved
The start sounds beautifully made, perhaps the plucks could be a bit more filtered and less hitting, or you could turn them into more hard hitting as the rising comes along. The riser sounds amazing with tons of things to listen to all at once, yet still being in great motion. At 1:07 this pitch shifting doesn’t sound the great, it sounds a bit offkey until it gets to more hardstyle parts then it sounds a bit better mixed. At 1:32 it sounds pretty good at first, but the transition to a more upper pitched hard hitting snare is a bit jarring in my opinion, a cymbal would’ve definitely helped. The transition at 1:56 could be improved with a louder cymbal, sorta like my last criticism, but other then that, it’s a great ambient sounding break from the hardstyle chaos. 2:35 is something I really enjoy, it almost sounds like dubstep, even though I think that was unintentional. The second riser could have a different hook at the end, but hey, that’s just me speaking, usually the second hooks are a lot longer then the first ones from all the songs similar to this I know. At 3:26, the melody gets repetitive after a bit (even if it’s a hard style track, there is a limit) and the transition to it could’ve been a bit better, again, a cymbal could’ve worked wonders.
Overall, pretty nice track! I also love the story behind it, it fits extremely well into the track itself, I can definitely see this being used in some cinematic theatre. Nice work man!
4.2/5 stars
I am grateful for your thoughtful and comprehensive feedback on my song. Your insights will be invaluable as I continue to develop my musical skills.
Transitions could be better since it sounds like they just straight up switch from pattern to pattern with no transition or warning, which makes it jarring.
It’s got a nice rhythm, though it’s not your best, could definitely be improved.
Keep it up X-500
Okay, its was how default wip demo, which I made for a short time and to show that I'm alive damn it, let's be honest
Pretty epic! Nice work!
LOVING THIS SONG MATE! IT TOO GOOD! Fits really well with the animation as well!
Top tier Broski!
And hyperstacks is still in the works? I thought it got finished years ago?
it’s 95% done, it got remastered and updated/adapted for the latest VR gear :)
Hello again! Glad to see I’m in time for dis :3
It’s really good as always, a bit better than your last one, but I have a question.
Why don’t you add tags?
thanks! glad you made it! i don't know; i don't really like tags, i don't even like filling out descriptions that much, or titling them... i'm lazy....
Not bad mate! Decent work!
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