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The guitar reminds me a lot of Techock by Waterflame, what instrument did you use for that?
I like the beat, though the sudden pauses of the guitar at around 0:31 are a bit odd, I feel that could be improved with some tweaking. 0:47 has those weird dubby things that make the piece feel extremely weird and just super… wrong? Is that the right word for it? I personally if I wanted to add some form of dub thing, I would have used a GMS bass and made it that way with some equalizers and levelers, maybe some distortion as well.
And about the industrial ambience at 1:18, transitioning could’ve been put a bit better, even a simple cymbal would’ve been better than nothing altogether. The ambience itself sounds pretty cool and coulda used some more instruments, filtered scream samples could’ve worked wonders there, and would’ve made a more emotionally captivating section.
At 1:41, it oddly reminds me of my old 2024 song -The Gutters- my take on industrial music, but the way you used that weird whoosh dubby thing sound (im not sure how to describe it) just sounds weird and isn’t a good transition to the final segment of the song.
Overall, coulda been better, but I will tell you this, this inspired me to make more industrial songs, maybe when I reach my 400 fan special I’ll work on my industrial music skills! Decent work, keep it up ^_0
No, in fact they exist, but I wrote the piano roll itself differently and what about 0:47, this is an arp with a 303 clip. And yes, I took the guitar from Z3ta+ with the same track name. Drum loop from drummax specifically for industrial. And thank you for taking the time to do this fuss!;) All the best to you in the future, I appreciate it!
UPD: Yes, in moments I inspired 'Techock'
A bit repetitive, and really has like 3 genres put into one song at different times. And the entire song just sounds like something a newbie at Fl studio would make.
Though I do like the riser at around 1:59, and that it actually turns into something cool, but then those weird bells 3:44 just make it turn a bit too bad sounding, if you’ve heard of DistantCry, it sorta sounds like that.
But my main problem is the weirdness and not too good use of arps, this sounds extremely weird and almost as if the entire song is just arps being repeated over eachother over and over again.
Sorry man, this just ain’t it
@X-500 I’m judging based off the quality of the music, not whether the sfx is good or not. If I was judging the sfx, this would be a 4 star, but yeah, the sfx has potential when used in the right setting… this is not the right setting 😂
And if that’s the case, I would change the genre to experimental
But if you read the description above, then you probably noticed that I highlighted the fact that I was doing special fx, so I think that this all sounds quite justified for the appropriate genre and it will all pay off soon, right?
Up: oh! well maybe. In general, I use fairly high-quality plugins
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I changed the genre at your request
Honestly! This is the first song to be a part of both the “Waterflame music for idiots” playlist, and the “Waterflame inspired collection”! Impressive!
This isnt that bad, trust me, you can ask @speedorh, the proud owner of the shit trophy!
Nice job! And don’t delet this, it’s good!
Live in the present, and keep a good mentality! The future isn’t certain, and the past already happened! :D
Hi… really miss your old stuff waterflame
Thanks for being my inspiration:)
Lovely tune as always steam!
This is impressive as well! The bass reminds me of modern day pop songs you’d hear on the radio! It’s cool that you sorta made a pop breakbeat mix, even though it’s like mixing red and purple, you somehow managed it! My only real complaint is how choppy the breaks are, it makes the Song sound a bit like your rapidly turning it off for a split, but at the second part I don’t have that problem, it’s also when you used more open and semi open hats, rides, and cymbals.
Last of all, I wouldn’t consider this DrumNBass, this is way too slow for it to be drum n bass, I say it’s general rock or pop!
Amazing work! I like this!
9.4/10 stars!
The start could use some reverb, but it does sound like a decent lead. The amen breaks are also very generic. Orchestral hits aren’t something you hear in a lot of drum n bass songs, though I think stretching them a bit and making them a bit louder could make a better representation to how intense you want this piece, sorta 0:59! Speaking of 0:59, I like the little slowdown you did, before bringing it back, and you don’t really hear rock guitars in DNB songs either, so it’s impressive how you were able to make it work!
I also like the wobbly bass around 1:41, gives it a VGM feel! I love VGM music!
Decent work! 7.7/10
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