Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[supernova]

Yo, I noticed in your links a Bandlab link. Are you using the mobile version or the cakewalk version? If it’s cakewalk, then no problem, if it’s the mobile version, don’t put audio made from that on here, it’s not allowed on ng.

Just for your info in case you didn’t know XD.

Edit: the pc version I think is called cakewalk lol

rafagame2 responds:

oohhhhh ok, i use the PC version (idk what you mean by cakewalk).

[17]

My honest answer when someone asks me what’s the prime number 15 and 19

[Ghost House]

Truly a song

[WELL MET]

Congrats on weekly 3rd! Well met!

[Sunray City]

Funkay breaks baby!

Love the samples here! Also a big fan of the sax, truly fits the mood of a Sunray city! Guitar is perfection, synths are great! Can get a bit repetitive, but overall this is a really good song! The hats at 1:23 could also have less volume, or maybe even getting rid of them would be better, it’s a bit loud and hard on the ears.

Amazing work! I’ve tried going in this direction with my own music, still practicing lol.

[jupiter]

We starting to make planets now!? XD

beautiful song as always! Great work, after Saturn! Make Mars! And maybe you could practice with some desert like instruments on that one!

trevor8 responds:

oooo; i like where your head's at!

[~Stay~]

Some cool stuff from the album. But fluxus remains on top 🙏

[Were where you on that fate-ful day? "Battle VS: The Reference Girl"]

The chiptune sounds very dissonant in the track, and isn’t well tuned, and overall it just doesn’t sound right. The mixing could also be a bit more improved, maybe adding more compression to the bass. There’s also that weird gap in the later middle of the song, I feel it’s better to just put that gap as a transition, like a reverse cymbal! Something I do like is the drum melody, and overall the melody at the end, it sounds natural! The drums are pretty fitting for this song as well, it’s mainly the instruments and tuning that’s not too great.
What key is this song in? Cause it’s better to have a certain key if the song doesn’t have one, that’s a way to get rid of the dissonance, as well as using EQ and possibly just different instruments.
Btw, I found you through @Overscore, and tbh, I might be taking your side since he seems to have made the rude reply, and maybe he was just baiting, I’m not sure. Wealth doesn’t determine a musician (though it can help)
Keep up the good work on whatever you make! :D
(Why do I have a feeling there’s an inside joke that I’m not getting XD)

happyghosts responds:

Thank you for your response though I dont quite agree with all your points.
The song is in a scale, the phrygian scale of b minor, and maybe its just your ears because I dont hear any dissonance.
BTW the "chiptune" that I think youre referring to is actually a GM clav. anyway.

I sort of agree that there could be a better transition to the end part, I ran out of ideas a bit.
It's cool that you like the end melody, when I made it it didnt feel much different than composing the rest of the song, just without the other instruments mostly, so maybe you're right that the bass needs to be improved. The lead and clav sound great in combination and thats sort of what I built this version of the song on.
Also there's no inside jokes, I think thats the worst kind of humor. A lot of the time my song titles are references to semi-obscure stuff, or just meant to be silly.

[Carrier of Pain]

A lot of the melodies crowd over one another and seems to have a severe lack of mixing, and in some cases the piece sound’s dissonant. The vocaloid also seems to not be well made, and many of the instruments are too high pitched, probably to make a “I’m going insane” atmosphere? Either way, this isn’t the best, but it’s definitely not the worse I’ve heard. The main problems are the volume, the mixing, and the key. Just keep practicing and experimenting, maybe look up a tutorial or 2 on how to do something better!
Your DEFINITELY gonna be scouted, in fact, you already are it seems, you might be mistaking scouted for “Whitelisted”, when that will happen, I have no clue, but you gotta be patient, it will come eventually!
In conclusion, keep practicing! Don’t let anyone’s review good or bad get the best of you, and learn from it! I look forward to seeing what you’ll become! :D

[THE REALLY LONG SONG COLLAB]

@yawnmorning

This song is LONGER then summer vacation ToT

darkmangopsychology responds:

theres 104 days of summer vacation