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Don’t really hear space, but I do hear an abandoned city! This doesn’t start like many dubstep songs with a loud but long leads, but rather so sort of staccato leads, short but effective leads that sound more like trance then dubstep. It’s really interesting! Good job!

Impressive! It’s not everyday you hear a synthwave song with lyrics! Amazing work!

ThePal responds:

I'm glad you liked it! :D

I’d recommend choosing a pad rather then a lead or bass for starting the song, but I do like the guitar bass.

You do really good when the drop hits, though the build up and hooks need a bit of work, such as the bass could be louder on the hooks.

But I did enjoy listening, keep going!

S7Gaming responds:

Thanks for sharing your opinion, ill make sure to try it out!

Not bad!

Did you voice the lyrics yourself? Pretty good!
Though that transition at 3:05 needs a bit more work, it sounds like a different song completely! I have those issues all the time as well lol!

I know what you put in this song
50% Run
50% Die

Did I Get it?

Some instruments are too high pitched and make the song sound awkward, it also has not that much compression put into it. Could be better, but not the worse, Decent!

I recently started putting compressors in my songs! Best decision of my life! It makes my music sound so much better!

Edit: @X-500 I don’t, but using them makes certain parts sound better and louder, which is something I usually struggled with lol

X-500 responds:

Yes, but you don't have to use them everywhere
EDIT: Yes, but this is not always

I showed this to a person who didn’t like clocks

They didn’t have any TIME for my nonsense

Pretty cool!

I like the violin used in this! But then again, I have a huge love for violins due to waterflames use of them. I like the beat in general, it’s a bit repetitive, but not overly boring as hell.

Intro is pretty boring and a bit too repetitive, no change in drum beats or tune except for the bass, and even that isn’t too well made either. It does step it up a bit at the keyboard with a pretty catchy tune, and the pad sounds really well made. The phone does not go well with the song either.

In conclusion, catchy, but a bit boring and repetitive.
Keep trying!

LonelyCubee responds:

Thanks for the criticism, ill try and make better songs in the future!!!

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