Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cognitohazard]

I hear a lot of -Slime Factory- by Preds in this piece!

I don’t even wanna know the bpm, but hey, it’s good! Great job, I love the use of synths in this!

[Landscape]

Yoooo, this would be a cool song to remaster! No joke! I believe a remaster of this would be an absolute hit! What do you think?

JoHassa responds:

The thought has crossed my mind before.. but in all honesty there's not really anything I like about this track - it was very rushed and the overall idea just wasn't good lol. Thanks for listening tho! :)

[Jolly Roger Bay Remix]

I love this game man!

[Scientific Ambience]

… thanks…

[Before the Sulfuric Throne]

Definitely one of the least repetitive songs I’ll ever hear. Pretty nice job!

[AIM - Lost in Isolation]

You found it… the end…

After many long battles, many hard fought wars, everything you have done has brought you up to this point. Every friend you have made, every stone you threw, every idea you got, every thing you kept secret and showed to the world… it all lead to this. You don’t know what’s behind that door, heaven, hell, purgatory, nothing, who knows!? But you smile, happy that no matter where you go, something different is up ahead… I guess we all need a change in scenery…

No matter where you go, you still suffered earth… that’s a pretty big accomplishment, Congrats!

(amazing song! I absolutely love the “The end” feel to it. I sorta imagined that building that is the place where it decides your fate.)

BusanBlack responds:

That beautifully sums it up. Life is always going to be difficult, but to live when you get one chance to experience this world is more amazing than any obstacle you face.

Thank you for your review and your words!

[Reckless]

I’m gonna make a reckless comment saying this track is the best you’ve made

JoHassa responds:

Happy to hear that! :D One of my favourites as well. Thank you!

[Countdown to Descension(AIM2024)]

This is GOLD! It’s something you’d definitely hear in some sort of war movie, or atleast in my opinion, and due to your profile pic, I’m imagined a horrible war in Antarctica, many counts of battle and such. This is an amazing masterpiece! You did extremely good!

Amazing!

TheRiskster responds:

Thanks for the awesome comment!
the feeling i was going for was definitely one of battle or struggle.

now, to put a a little war helmet on the penguin in my profile pic...

[AIM - FEARMONGER]

The transition at the start could be improved, the one around 0:33 to be exact, those snares came in straight out of scenic nowhere! But strangely the rest of the transitions are good.

Not bad! Good job!

WAVESS responds:

I completely agree, I got lazy and didn't really know what to do to help fix it

[PSRP - Locked Heart {I'm luxurious}]

Ok, prepare for harsh criticism

Repetitive, and just bad design in music melodies, it sounds like multiple songs are being played, and all of the melodies are just random and just looped together, sorta like a mashup. Not to mention, in the parts where they aren’t lapped sounding, there is either too little quiet space, or just an uncatchy background tune, all that there is a hat in the too quiet phases.

Most of the mistakes you’ve made here are also mistakes on my very old song Journey to Welkin, according to Taintedlogic… here.
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1205510

Now don’t get me wrong! The melodies are absolute fire, ngl! It’s just the way they are put is horrid, and I hope you don’t take this too offensively, but that voice at 3:02 needs to be edited STAT, reverb, chorus, compressors, and possibly auto tune depending on how skilled you are with it.

In conclusion… it ain’t your best, that’s for sure, but hey, it has its perks, melodies are gansta as hell! And the fact you added a harp into a song meant to sound gansta is impressive, respect!
But yeah, as @G2961 said, the asset fell, many things could be improved.

Reminder, this is my own take at this song, many people have different opinions, don’t you dare think I didn’t see those 3 faves, so… we good?

Final breakdown
Melody: 9.5/10
Vocals: 3/10
Drum pattern: 8/10
Effort: 10/10
Instrument use: 6/10
Atmosphere: 9/10
Mixing and Master: 5/10
Repetitiveness: 2/10
Gangsta shiz: 20/10
Overlapping: 1/10

X-500 responds:

Because I did it as an instrumental for a song with a verse and a chorus, and yes, you were mistaken, but there is a reverb on the vocals, it is of normal volume and I could not just make it louder otherwise there would be problems with dynamic
. I was inspired by several works of Western rappers in most T.I, but you know there. That's why you took it too harshly. And thank you for not forgetting.
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