The bass is a bit too high and blocks out some of the song. There’s also this weird snare at 0:53, or I think that’s a snare, maybe a shaker? Maybe both at once, not sure? But it wouldn’t hurt to turn it down. The mixing near the end isn’t the best either, I’d recommend turning some things down.
Pretty straight forward, and pretty decent, the lead is cool!
Edit: a little better, though the end still isn’t well mixed along with the bass, I’d say getting rid of that grit bass is best, but hey, better!