A huge improvement when it comes to varied instruments and transitions, but first, let’s go over the things that need to be worked on.
The pads in the beginning need some reverb, or something to make it sound connected, here it sounds more like a lead, though it could be much better as a bg pad, to provide atmos.
The hats at 1:15 are a bit too loud and thick, small and non impactful hats are recommended in a track like this.
The drums also slightly get in the way of the main melody at the first part, some filter or lowering the volume could help tons!
hell, I say you put it as loop instead of song when it comes to this track, the end and start are perfectly matched
But! The drums are dusty! As someone with a knack for dusty drums, this was a bliss to hear!
Sound design is amazing, I’ve actually only gotten into using EQ until recently, but if this is how it makes it sound, then I’m definitely using them!
Very cheery melody, it’s really catchy and fun.
Conclusion: It’s mainly choice of instruments, and how they form you need to work on, when it comes to rhythm and melody, your amazin!
Keep it up!