Cool song!
Cool song!
For the first half of the song, it just felt like it was looping the same melody and layering over and over again. I like the use of the instruments, even if the brass they are a bit dry. The second half does really well adding more variety to the song, new melodies and rhythms! The brass is a bit dry as I said, but it’s still really well placed, and just needs some wetness or bass to it, or maybe a replacement instrument. Melodies are quite nice as well! Though I also have to say that the drums may be a tad to high volume, maybe turn it down or lower its velocity.
I love the vibe of it, it sounds really nice, though it could use better transitions, the repetitiveness allows the song to be pretty good on its own, I’m mainly talking about the parts where the brass comes in.
Good work, and keep forth! This is nice, and congrats on the frontpage!
I also love your name, TheDecentGamers… although this is more then decent, it’s still a nice name!
Yeah, this song was originally like 35 seconds long lol. I just made it longer to have something in the background playing on loop. Thanks for the feedback though!
Very cute beat here!
Transitions could use some work, the amount of different vibes in this piece is jarring, and the start sounds a little weird. At 2:03, it’s a bit minimal, and could use some bg noise. Some Melodies also sound odd in general, and some just go from one style to another, which just sounds odd. I have a feeling you made this in a rush, since most of the problems are in the second half. The song could also have more hooks, rather then transitions.
Either wise, good sound design and pretty strong mixing! Very varied, but remember, some repetitiveness can be good!
Nice work here! Keep forth! :D
Pretty nice stuff here, though I’d say it’s a bit too compressed on the drums.
It follows the melody really well, in fact, you know what the synth reminds me of… Rukkus(Nightkilla), the guy who made the song nine circles. The synth here reminds a lot of him.
Really nice work on this! Good job!
Phaser go BRRRRRR
A bit too much phaser in the drums, I’m guessing that’s just part of the soundfont. It sounds pretty cool, though the vocals are kinda out of place. And za bass sounds wicked! Love it, it does sound like something I’d find in Metroid. Nice work! Just some less phaser and this can end up becoming great!
Your voice is a lot different then what I thought it was. You sound like someone who snowboards or skateboards
I may not skateboard but I do have tattoos and play cool rock music if that counts
Such a happy tune, makes me wanna hug a penguin <3
I also love the art by @chocoholicmonkey! He did real good with this one. Due to my device I can’t play the game, but if I ever get the chance, I definitely will!
It’s too repetitive man :(… that’s a joke I saw the tags lol XD
AGAIN! Fantastic use in orchestral, only real critique I have is maybe turn down the velocity of the drums a little. Definitely my fave in the entire collection of PvZ you made, though they don’t really remind me of it, maybe cause I never really played it.
Orchestral work is crazy good, melodies are overall really good, very few times I actually found it weird or repetitive. Mixing is pristine, and leveling is pretty nice, all the songs are just a pure vibe as well! Only problem I see is it doesn’t sound like PVZ, but again, that could just be me so I won’t count it as any real “critique”.
For the whole collection! I give you 9.7/10
Beautifully made, and I know you’ll get popular here if you keep going! Say, I’ll help you a lil, by shouting you out for frontpage! Hope you keep going dude, this is good stuff!
Keep Forth, Artch :D
To be honest, I didn't expect this to be someone's favourite (I think it's pretty apparent lol), but hey, maybe I underappreciated it. About PvZ inspiration, I DID go off track here, to the point where even I barely see it myself, so yeah. Also, thanks for the shoutout and reviews, I will try to learn something from them!
Love your violin and guitar use, pizzicato is a bit cliche at the start, but that’s literally the only area where it doesn’t sound amazing (it still sounds pretty well, just needed a better melody or some tuning). Really awesome work man! I love the orchestral use!
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