Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[THE REALLY LONG SONG COLLAB]

@yawnmorning

This song is LONGER then summer vacation ToT

darkmangopsychology responds:

theres 104 days of summer vacation

[Chill Space Adventures]

Congrats on the frontpage!

It’s a bit on the repetitive side, and the synth sounds a little dissonant at the beginning. I like the more calm synth at around 1:15, the bass around the same time sounds a bit loud, but overall not bad. The synths arp at around 1:49 sound a lot like a song known as Skyless, it’s really neat! It’s still a bit repetitive throughout the song, and has a drum beat that is really reminiscent of hip hop tracks. A bit of a sudden and not really well made transition to a HPF(High Pass Filter) version of the previous song, that seems to come back again.
Big fan of the new drums at 3:40, very dusty, but dusty in this case is good! The beat gets a little boring at around 4:20, try and add something new, like a different melody, different instrument, or possibly some radio transmission sfx! You kinda just made it go for longer then needed, that really it.

At 4:55 it gets interesting with the cutesy synth, really big fan of it! And it’s extended perfectly! I like how the song does go into bitcrush, but I’d recommend turning it down a little in the process!
Decent work, could use some variety, and leveling improvements, definitely a cool idea of a song tho! Keep it up, and congrats on the frontpage again!

Noltrollroll responds:

Thanks for the review! I will admit, the song goes on for longer than intended, but like i said, it was an old flp that i just uploaded without fixing some things lol XD.

[w/o u]

Not bad! But the drums are a bit on the compressed side, it also feels really empty at the beginning. At 1:01 we have that weird dissonant melody, it definitely sounds better with the reverb, but on its own it just sounds awkward and not that well in the song. The solo is probably the best part of the song, with the synth just needing some reverb and the drums seem to get better as the song goes out. Keep it up, keep experimenting! I can definitely hear the emotional side, though of course it can always be stronger :)

dijek responds:

Thanks for the feedback!!

Just made some adjustments, let me know how it sounds now!

[Return To The Whorl]

A seriously lovely track! I’m in love with how all the instruments are made, the length is long, but good, and the melodies are almost psychedelic! I feel like this is taking me on a journey through a universe where nothing makes sense, but yet finding sense to it. The keyboard is cutesy, and yet it fits in so well! I’m also in love with the strings, as an orchestral fan, I seriously can’t get over it, it just sounds so pristine.
Though of course there are mishaps, the drums seem to kick in a bit too loudly and suddenly at first in my opinion, and some parts of the song are kinda repetitive. But overall! This is some good stuff! I love the mysterious atmosphere, it just feels so peaceful! Nice work man!

Halindir responds:

Your words are exceedingly kind, and your criticism fair. Thank you

[INTERNET!]

The name fits completely well! Love the bass, and the synths are really good as well. Drum kicks might be a bit on the loud side, but mixing overall sounds pretty well made! I love how this basically accurate describes the internet, memes, lobby music, and THA NETHA

sagelapis responds:

Thanks!!! :3

[Old School Mellow]

Always love listening to your stuff when I find it, it’s always weird or absurd in some way. The repeated kick is a bit too loud, and honestly the song could go better without it. I still love the song though, reminds me of looking over a hut on an island in a lake next to a bursting city. Nice work!

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I don't get much satisfaction from making normal music, so I always lean towards the odd. I agree the kicks weren't mixed as well as I would have liked but the only thing I had to work with was a mix-down track, because this was actually part of a live set I did recorded to analog tape many years ago.

[Why did I make this]

You make a FEW songs like this… but on my YouTube… it’s a series >:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cExfFjy826A&list=PLQggkhSrt_fUxUV-sm2IfR3JZI3eRrG8z

(Btw this is probably my second fave now lol)

NEON-SKIES responds:

Haha, should I post it to youtube
XDDDDDD

[neptune]

The ice giant! If we ever get technological enough, I’m listening to this while wearing a fur coat sitting on an icy rock on Neptune. I also love how long it is! Really sweet stuff man! Keep it up!

trevor8 responds:

haha; it's long because it's s l o o o o w
(tempo's like 71 i think) ;)

[TRINITY]

Not bad! Could use some more reverb! But it sounds pretty well made! The dubstep is also a bit loud on the ears, maybe turn it down a little bit? That’s kinda. Thing I see in this, a lot of sudden volume changes.
Could use better mixing more sound and such but still, pretty good!

NEON-SKIES responds:

Thanks! I'll turn down the dubstep part a bit

Edit: fixed

[Cool hip hop song]

Nice! It’s pretty simple, but sometimes that’s a good thing!
The lead at the start sounded pretty nice, I love the bass though out the song, but I feel it can have more patterns in between the non bass areas.
The acid synth sounds a little off for a song like this, and this doesn’t really sound like hip hop, it sounds more like standard electronic or experimental music. It’s also extremely repetitive, a lot of repeating beats, maybe add some more varied melodies. The gap at the end sounds pretty authentic as well.
Try and make the songs less repetitive, and add some more reverb to stop those little tiny gaps in the synth. Overall, pretty well done!

ZedzyMusic responds:

reverb on the synth would sound HEAVENLY.
I might want to update the song...
edit: I tried updating it but my wifi didn't like that :/ ill try later
other edit: updated the song, sounds WAY better!