The piano could have less punch to it, since at some points during the start it seems to have too hard of a hit and it makes the piano seem less professional, if that makes sense. The kick riser at 0:38 also seem very beginner, but I won’t let it effect you since your prolly a beginner. Other than that, it seems a bit empty and could use more varied instruments, but this is really good! Really catchy tune and melody! Keep it up!