Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[THR333]

Not bad man! I like how it’s a lot more different then most other synthwave I’ve seen!

OPFX responds:

Thank you! Synthwave is can be really diverse!

[Dark Paradise]

Not bad man!

G2961 responds:

Thanks!

[Dynamite]

You truly believe you can make an explosion bigger then mine? With just the use of measly stick of dynamite? Oh, it will take much more then just a few red sticks with gunpowder to compete with even a fraction of me!

Nice work man! It’s pretty neat, I like the bass, and the mixing is a lot better compared to a lot of your other songs! Keep it up!

Dynamic0 responds:

Whoa, chill, I respect you and your explosions!

Thanks for the review :)

[Gamer Boys]

Definitely something GD related.

It has a lot of instruments similar to a musician that starts with G… I forgot his name, but he’s known for the GD level known as X. Coolio work!

chillyborger responds:

Thxx

[Mantis Prey Sway (UNUSED) (Humans-B-Gone! #8 OST)]

Not bad man! I like the fact it’s so plucky. It varies in Melodies a lot, but it for some reason feels like it’s a bit repetitive, like it’s looping. Some parts are a bit empty, 1:18 for example. Overall, pretty straight forward song that does the job right! Nice work!

DDXdotEXE responds:

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! This one is from the beginning of last year, and was made with the intention of being a part of a particular scene of animation, so I didn't want to make things too terribly big and overwhelming in certain places (and it wasn't really touched again after being scrapped from the episode), I've been working on my mixing and composition over time though, so hopefully the emptiness or repetitiveness will be remedied for later releases!

[[T70] Cybernetic Melody]

Ok! So you do know how to make better melodies… XD. The drum loop could be a bit less choppy in the beginning, and of course their are some mixing problems, too much repetitiveness and such, but all it really takes is practice!

Tr1ck70 responds:

Thanks for the feedback c:

A lot of these songs were rushed, I made them all in around 3 months... not nearly enough time to produce 8 fully complete songs. Funny story, most of them were made at school with some garageband plugins as the school used Mac pc's.

I've recently moved on to FL studio 21 as I main windows at home, and I'm learning it with help from Shulkern, another small producer here on NG. Thx bro :)

[[T70] Tough Luck]

All it takes is practice, we definitely need some better melodies, maybe find a certain key that works for you, since the piano is way off key. Many of the sfx are too loud, such as 0:46. At 0:54 that does have a sort of melody, even if it is off a little. I’d also try and add a drum loop of some sort. If I were to name all the advice I’d give to improve this, you’d probably end up more confused then with knowledge.
If you really want to get good advice, I’d recommend checking in with someone known as @Taintedlogic, you just gotta be willing to take his criticism as just that, rather than as insults. He can be a bit harsh, but his critiques have definitely helped me in the past few years!
But the main part is to keep practicing, practice making melodies, practicing new things, and just not giving cause something doesn’t work.

Tr1ck70 responds:

Thanks for feedback! As the description says, this was definitely meant to be the curtain-closer to this album/ep, but it definitely could have been better, like you said with volume control on sfx and piano being off key and seperate tempos.

[Dreamsong (Descent Mix)]

Super epic! Thanks ShangXian for introducing me to you!

SHE-RE responds:

Thank you, and thank you @ShangXian for recommending me!

[petrichor]

Nice work! Though a few of the synths are a bit strange, and the drums could be amped down a lil bit. Nice work! Has a sorta VGM and synthwave vibe lol

trevor8 responds:

hahaha, my synths are always strange; i record them at the bottom of a lake so they sound like ancient sea mammals! thank you as always! (i needs to check on the drums now)

[NekoZeko - The Lighthouse]

0:54 Did you sample fucking Noise from pizza tower XD!?

Drum kicks are a bit weird in the beginning of the song, but eventually it started flowing better in the actual dubstep part. It sounds like a mixture between those NCS songs and some dark and gritty dubstep, I also love the name The Lighthouse, it oddly fits. I’m not sure if this is more House or Dubstep, so I’m really gonna let you stick with what you think. Dark atmosphere is a pretty sick as well, and it’s pretty well mixed. The laser dropper at 0:40 doesn’t really fit, but other then that, transitions, mixing, and instrumentation is all pretty well made!

Keep it up!

(btw your pfp makes me think of that same cat in a raincoat doing a cute goofy dance on top of a lighthouse :3)

NekoZeko responds:

Haha, No I didn't sample Pizza tower. I've never played the game, but wow. Thanks for such a detailed review of my song! I'm glad you love it!