So @BaconflakesGD asked me to check your stuff out! And now that I’ve done my busywork I’m finally doing it!
Well I like the melodies and the ideas used in this piece, the kick is a bit too compressed and loud, it blocks out a lot of aspects in the song. The piece also feels a bit more empty, I would recommend adding another pad in the mix, or maybe something odd, like strings, or a legato piano melody, like a 4/4 melody. The piano is also a little dissonant until the other instruments come into play. In fact a lot of the synths are jarring and dissonant.
I do like a lot of the ideas you went with the song, the melody is simple, but it’s catchy, and will be remembered for the rest of the night! I say this piece was worth it! I’m currently learning LMMS and other VST plugins, so I feel you lol! XD. The production of the instruments is also really crisp! I sincerely enjoy it, it’s almost entrancing!
Nice work, just keep practicing and you’ll make it! Baconflakes seems to already admire you, so that’s something to be proud of, don’t you think ;)!