Unsure if the offtune melody is meant to be a part of dreamcorem but it is very offtune. I do like the plucky synth at the beginning, along with the Minecraft-esq synths that seem to sneak their way in. Production isn’t the greatest, I’d recommend turning up the master a little bit and maybe adding more multiband compressors to the mix, on High Pass. This should allow for a more clean sounding sound. The drums are also a bit overwhelming, again, some high pass filters should work wonders!
I do like many of the melodies, along with the composition structure you decided to go with! It sounds pretty clean and melodic! Keep producing! :D
Reply to @zunami-music: a lot of people seem to mention they made it in the past and didn’t upload it, I would also recommend stating that out in your desc, just so people can understand why it’s not as good as your more recent stuff. Most people head for the recent stuff on your pfp, so that’s why it’s recommended to tell why on every song why this one could potentially be less skillful than the others.
Either way, still a good job. Thanks for replying :D