I absolutely love this song! Amazing job! I like the punchy rhythm!
I absolutely love this song! Amazing job! I like the punchy rhythm!
Thanks!! That the was point for this rhythm
Goes into Frontpaged
Sees this
Me:
Oh, it’s just G2961 getting 7000000 fans again, no biggy!
(but seriously, I’m starting to think the mods just don’t see me as frontpage worthy because of what I use to make music.)
Edit: @g2961 but here’s the thing, I NEVER make it to frontpage, and the one time I did, I made a overly big inspiration list to go with it, hence it’s practically impossible for me not to get frontpaged. You make a song and it’s basically a 50% chance it’s gonna get frontpaged! I make a song, and it’s like the mods don’t even see it, I just wonder why my stuff never gets frontpaged without having to collab with Wilidacious, but yet I see songs on their with horrible mixing and other flaws, but yet they will get frontpaged in an instant! I’m just wondering what I’m doing wrong, so I’m deciding not to mention Fl studio mobile to see if that changes something.
The inspiration list was huge, of course it was gonna get frontpaged, I’m talking a normal song, like Til the end, or merriment. @g2961
HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA!
this is normal, sometimes I don't get to the main page either
What about your Zethra?
Ok bro… How! How the hell did you get frontpaged with only 130 listens, 1 fav, 8 downloads and 1 vote! I’m not trying to insult you, I’m happy you got frontpaged, but it makes me wonder how my stuff doesn’t get frontpaged. Good job on this btw!
No idea 😭 I didn’t even know this got frontpaged until this comment lol
I don’t really know how the Newgrounds frontpage system works, but I hope you get frontpaged soon!
Amazing work as always! If only you made this when I was dying from allergies!🤧
Amazing work Wilidacious! The collab is doing pretty well as some news to tell you!
haha, thank you! have you tried nettle leaf? i take it in the spring, either via tea or exteact and it really helps! what is this news you speak of?!
Not bad, though I do have a few suggestions. Many of the instruments come a bit too suddenly , such as the choir and that transition scratch at 0:56, and the metallic glitch beats also are a bit too loud. Makes sense you would be a bit rusty hence you been gone for a bunch of days, though I’m in absolute love with the beat itself! Good job!
Maybe. And Hi, dud:
It has potential. The guitar at some points during the more up beat parts is off key, and the pan flute is a bit too choppy for my liking. Sometimes the rhythm of the instruments don’t go well either, and it feels a bit rushed, if I am correct, then I’d recommend spending more time on it, but hey, your still in practice! You’re doing great! I look forward to more, let me know so i can review you again! :D
I wouldn't say that the guitar is off beat but rather the other instruments are since the guitar is the foundation of the track. This composition started out as a solo guitar song and then the VST instruments were added. But you are correct in amusing that it's rushed compared to my previous submission for AIM.
It’s very majestic, though at some points the strings are a bit choppy and don’t sound well. But either wise, a very straightforward piece that fits well with the image!
Edit: Practice is key! I’m not perfect either! Just check out my song odd house for example! It needs work, but it’s fun to listen to! Thanks for understanding, @Flamadour
Thanks for the review and kind words. And yes the strings are a bit choppy, I'm still getting used to utilising VST Instruments in my compositions. I mostly improvised the backing strings and wasn't sure how long to hold the notes for. Hopefully with more practice I'll get better at implementing them in future compositions.
Wish it was longer, but it sounds good!
Thanks!
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