The start sounds a bit like F-777, it sounds nice, but the transition from that to the hip hop type beat can be improved, a hook would do good in a moment like that. The lead sometimes go a bit too high pitched for it to sound good. There is also the drum beat which sounds more like a hip hop this would make good for rapping.
I also like the brass(?) instrument, it goes really well with the beat!
A pretty decent job! Nice!