Not bad! I actually really like it! The dubstep doesn’t sound too good, and needs to be in longer strands rather then just the simple wub wub, sounds pretty good as an atmospheric song!
In fact, I feel this could get frontpaged if it weren’t for the subs :)
Hope your ear feels better soon… or you get used to it in general.
It got frontpaged lol
Thanks for your feedback, I'll keep it in mind ^^
Noice!
I seriously enjoy this! Recently made a chiptune song myself after an inside joke me and a few friends made. Some parts are a bit empty and could use some pad to go along with it, or some sort of atmosphere. The sine is also super sick cause it reminds me a lot of deltarune. I would also like if the end wasn’t just a repeat, but instead the end gets deeper into a melancholy pitch, and back into happy melody. Nice work!
Why did I think you quit music XD
Does have that late night vibe, sorta. The marimba sounds cutesy and well done, mixing is cute, drums are fun! It’s a bit simple, and the Sfx at 1:00 doesn’t sound too right compared with the rest of the track. Overall, well mixed and well made! Good job!
Truly a song of all time
Thanks a lot mate!
Wait for more ! x)
Thanks for the review
Interesting! I like the quirky synths and the unique instruments used in this song! My fave part by far is the drums, they are so normal yet the normality seems so perfect in this track of chaos. The vocals are so weird but for a song like this it fits greatly. My only suggestion is to maybe add more lengthy basses!
Nice work man! Really unique then what I’m used too, but no less enjoyable!
Haha thanks for the review! :D
Another absolute banger from the album. This one actually gave me tears when I was in a tough time… it’s a truly amazing masterpiece, obviously the best in the album.
glad that my music can be of help through tough times <3 thanks!
Not bad, some of the vocals sound weird, but that’s expected on the first turn of vocaloid. Synths and guitar sound really well, sometimes the mixing gets a bit muddy and all over the place during the more upbeat areas. Overall mixing is well done, though leveling could be improved, the synth and such kinda block out the lyrics, and the lyrics themselves sound gibberish.
Good first attempt at vocaloid! Nice work!
I’d recommend adding some reverb to many of the instruments such as the string in the more empty parts of the song. Melodies are pretty well made, possibly my favorite part of the song are the melodies, a lot of catchy melodies. Drums are also a bit dry and empty, as well as too much volume in the track.
I’d recommend adding more better transitions, even a simple cymbal can do wonders for music like this, but I think the biggest problem is reverb, you always want to have some decay in the instruments when it comes to orchestral instruments. As I’ve said earlier, the melodies are extraordinarily catchy, it just needs to have better transitions cause I feel like there are multiple songs in one here.
Could use work, but hey, for someone who’s just beginning, you’re doing good! Keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback! I enjoy learning from my mistakes. I will take reverb into consideration. For the second half, I changed the speed and key of the music.
Beautifully made! Great work my dude!
I genuinely can’t criticize it that all, perfect transitions, beautiful atmosphere, I guess MAYBE the synths are a bit overdramatic, BUT WOW!
This actually really amazing to listen to I will not lie at all. Great work!
Not bad man!
I like the instrumentation! Synths are cute though they have some very odd melodies compared to the drums. The rock guitar is also a bit on the odd side with all the chord transitions, sometimes longer notes are better for the job! It’s also an uncompressed, but it’s still sounds pretty well, maybe add some more hard hitting compression on the drums and synth.
Sounds well! I can hear both themes in this in a really good way! Great job, good luck in round 2!
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