Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sunburn]

Nice work! Man, pretty fire despite the fact there isn’t a single snare! XD

Guessing you were going minimal or emotional, since I hear that nice sounding piano and sax. Cool stuff man, keep going!

[sunset]

Sax sounds a bit weird in this form. I’d recommend adding some low filter, as well as some reverb. Me and a friend have made something similar, and that’s the best way to make sax sound good in this kind of environment.
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1347978

Drums sound pretty well, though the song is a bit empty overall, could use some sort of lofi effects, like trees flowing in the wind, a city street, a busy suburb, etc. Like the way the open hats sound, along with the pad, it sounds very mysterious, though the sax keeps throwing it off, it’s like one of those meme songs where it’s just an absurd rhythm, something you’d find on YouTube shorts/tiktok. It’s also a little bit repetitive, but it’s got a nice tune to it, the production is nice, I love the long pads, it just needs work on instrumentation, and repetitiveness.

O ver all ni cew ork du de, ke ep it up !

Btw, the transitions are very smooth, really nice work in that area, even though that’s usually a common messup.

yawnmorning responds:

thanks for the advise.
i will thing about this when i make something new.

[Control Queen - Lunziestella]

Bass at the beginning is a lil bit weird, but the vocaloid sounds pretty good! The drums sound very familiar, they sound like they are from FL Studio mobile :). Also a big fan of the strings, through I feel the chiptune melody could be more towards the middle then to the far left of my ear. Transitions could be a bit improved a little, it sounds a bit like 2 different songs, trust me, that’s hard, I used to have the same problem as well, I might still do to a point XD. The drums in the second part seem a bit soft, but they are pretty well made nonetheless! Ending is made pretty nicely, some sweet piano, and honestly for the whole song, not bad! Good work!

Lunziestella responds:

Thanks, im still getting the hang of making vocaloid tbh, i think me switching the bpm was bold for the later parts, transitions probably are my weakness tbh, but yeah i agree with most of this, might make an update later lol

[supernova]

Yo, I noticed in your links a Bandlab link. Are you using the mobile version or the cakewalk version? If it’s cakewalk, then no problem, if it’s the mobile version, don’t put audio made from that on here, it’s not allowed on ng.

Just for your info in case you didn’t know XD.

Edit: the pc version I think is called cakewalk lol

rafagame2 responds:

oohhhhh ok, i use the PC version (idk what you mean by cakewalk).

[17]

My honest answer when someone asks me what’s the prime number 15 and 19

[Ghost House]

Truly a song

[WELL MET]

Congrats on weekly 3rd! Well met!

[Sunray City]

Funkay breaks baby!

Love the samples here! Also a big fan of the sax, truly fits the mood of a Sunray city! Guitar is perfection, synths are great! Can get a bit repetitive, but overall this is a really good song! The hats at 1:23 could also have less volume, or maybe even getting rid of them would be better, it’s a bit loud and hard on the ears.

Amazing work! I’ve tried going in this direction with my own music, still practicing lol.

[jupiter]

We starting to make planets now!? XD

beautiful song as always! Great work, after Saturn! Make Mars! And maybe you could practice with some desert like instruments on that one!

trevor8 responds:

oooo; i like where your head's at!

[~Stay~]

Some cool stuff from the album. But fluxus remains on top 🙏