Ok, prepare for harsh criticism
Repetitive, and just bad design in music melodies, it sounds like multiple songs are being played, and all of the melodies are just random and just looped together, sorta like a mashup. Not to mention, in the parts where they aren’t lapped sounding, there is either too little quiet space, or just an uncatchy background tune, all that there is a hat in the too quiet phases.
Most of the mistakes you’ve made here are also mistakes on my very old song Journey to Welkin, according to Taintedlogic… here.
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1205510
Now don’t get me wrong! The melodies are absolute fire, ngl! It’s just the way they are put is horrid, and I hope you don’t take this too offensively, but that voice at 3:02 needs to be edited STAT, reverb, chorus, compressors, and possibly auto tune depending on how skilled you are with it.
In conclusion… it ain’t your best, that’s for sure, but hey, it has its perks, melodies are gansta as hell! And the fact you added a harp into a song meant to sound gansta is impressive, respect!
But yeah, as @G2961 said, the asset fell, many things could be improved.
Reminder, this is my own take at this song, many people have different opinions, don’t you dare think I didn’t see those 3 faves, so… we good?
Final breakdown
Melody: 9.5/10
Vocals: 3/10
Drum pattern: 8/10
Effort: 10/10
Instrument use: 6/10
Atmosphere: 9/10
Mixing and Master: 5/10
Repetitiveness: 2/10
Gangsta shiz: 20/10
Overlapping: 1/10