Instruments fit better, it’s just the overall structure isn’t exactly great. And the dubstep Growls are too standard, there are multiple other ways to make dubstep growls. I’d recommend looking online and you’ll find quite a few ways!
It is possible to make some good stuff on fl mobile, in fact, I’m one of said people! My friend @snikio was shocked when he heard I use fl mobile for all my music! Here, have a listen
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1362669
They aren't dubstep growls it's talking bass.
Not really calm and a little offbeat. But it does have a good feel to it! Keep it up! :D
Thanks for commenting..... sorry for that... I guess because its in 3/4 it sounds offbeat lol
It oddly reminds me of @Autodidactic’s work.
It sounds beautiful! But if the forests are orange, what color are the deserts, mountains, oceans, and cities? 🤔
You are right it kinda does sound like his work...but honestly..he is much better than me.... thanks for the support...deserts are dark blue .. mountains are white ..Ocean has no color...cities are made of mirrors
She is sad because it’s raining you say? :(
(Hugs dizzy to make her feel better)
Amazing chiptune song! I love the sound of it! And congrats on the frontpage!
Thanks.. This is the moment with rain and sadness https://youtu.be/nogKIfJy6_g?t=1574
Some seriously great classical music! Amazing work man, I love it!
Edit: WOAH! This goes way back, the frontpaged fooled me!
I'm shocked by your comment as I had not realized! Ten years and the memories from this journey still feels fresh to me. I feel like Mcconaughey in Interstellar.. what happened?
Ok bro, again, just some practice, I also highly doubt this took 4 hours to make, if it did then, ummm I don’t know what to say 😶🌫️.
Melodies seem better, it’s just transitions and things could be better mixed.
(Sorry if I sound rude, but I seriously doubt this did take 4 hrs. Forgive me if I sound rude, your new to this, I get it lol)
By the way it did take 4 hours because I didn't know what I was doing.
I remember making songs like this when I first started on Fl Mobile lol!
Basically, I’d say just have some practice, if I were to give criticism we’d be here all day. Basically try and use less distortion, some better melodies, and some better transitions, really all you should do so far is practice, sorry for the low score.
That's okay, thanks for the honest feedback, I'm trying to improve 👍
Ngl… good melody!
Fun fact: this song is technically a remake of something I did years earlier when I was like 11 in FL Studio mobile, and there's also an alternate version! Might try to revisit this again some time, but I doubt it lol
DAFUQ! I SWORE YOU WERE SCOUTED JUST A FEW DAYS AGO 🥶🥶😱😱😱😱
Please be careful, try to get samples and stuff from allowed sources, and don’t use AI. This will cause your stuff to get unscouted, as you may have seen. But now that I have scouted you,just try to be more careful, this ain’t like YouTube where copyright isn’t limited, we are mostly focused on original work. Sure, samples could be good, but I’d suggest getting some from a website called BreakBeatParadise. @Waterflame introduced the website to me and I couldn’t be happier
I will definitely make sure to be more careful with samples :)
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Great song! I like the ending and I’m kinda questioning if this is drum n bass or not, cause it sounds both like it and not like it! Great work mate! And very cursed pfp
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Thanks for the review! I was debating whether to call it ambient or dnb bc I think it might be both. Maybe it’s experimental? Idk lol
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