I’m gonna make a reckless comment saying this track is the best you’ve made
I’m gonna make a reckless comment saying this track is the best you’ve made
Happy to hear that! :D One of my favourites as well. Thank you!
This is GOLD! It’s something you’d definitely hear in some sort of war movie, or atleast in my opinion, and due to your profile pic, I’m imagined a horrible war in Antarctica, many counts of battle and such. This is an amazing masterpiece! You did extremely good!
Amazing!
Thanks for the awesome comment!
the feeling i was going for was definitely one of battle or struggle.
now, to put a a little war helmet on the penguin in my profile pic...
The transition at the start could be improved, the one around 0:33 to be exact, those snares came in straight out of scenic nowhere! But strangely the rest of the transitions are good.
Not bad! Good job!
I completely agree, I got lazy and didn't really know what to do to help fix it
Ok, prepare for harsh criticism
Repetitive, and just bad design in music melodies, it sounds like multiple songs are being played, and all of the melodies are just random and just looped together, sorta like a mashup. Not to mention, in the parts where they aren’t lapped sounding, there is either too little quiet space, or just an uncatchy background tune, all that there is a hat in the too quiet phases.
Most of the mistakes you’ve made here are also mistakes on my very old song Journey to Welkin, according to Taintedlogic… here.
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1205510
Now don’t get me wrong! The melodies are absolute fire, ngl! It’s just the way they are put is horrid, and I hope you don’t take this too offensively, but that voice at 3:02 needs to be edited STAT, reverb, chorus, compressors, and possibly auto tune depending on how skilled you are with it.
In conclusion… it ain’t your best, that’s for sure, but hey, it has its perks, melodies are gansta as hell! And the fact you added a harp into a song meant to sound gansta is impressive, respect!
But yeah, as @G2961 said, the asset fell, many things could be improved.
Reminder, this is my own take at this song, many people have different opinions, don’t you dare think I didn’t see those 3 faves, so… we good?
Final breakdown
Melody: 9.5/10
Vocals: 3/10
Drum pattern: 8/10
Effort: 10/10
Instrument use: 6/10
Atmosphere: 9/10
Mixing and Master: 5/10
Repetitiveness: 2/10
Gangsta shiz: 20/10
Overlapping: 1/10
Because I did it as an instrumental for a song with a verse and a chorus, and yes, you were mistaken, but there is a reverb on the vocals, it is of normal volume and I could not just make it louder otherwise there would be problems with dynamic
. I was inspired by several works of Western rappers in most T.I, but you know there. That's why you took it too harshly. And thank you for not forgetting.
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This is such a cute story, I absolutely love this! Good job!
Thanks for the kind words! :)
How did I miss this! Newgrounds should make a notif bar for their favorite creators uploads!
This is awesome! Though have you seen my latest preview on YouTube? The bass sorta reminds me of that! Nice job man!
haha; i know! it's so easy to get lost in here! i'll have to check out youtube! thanks!
Sounds so much like something I’d hear on the radio!
I love the drum samples used in this and the vocals!
It so sweet you made this for your girl, that’s absolutely adorable! You sir are talented asf! Amazing job, I hope you two love each other to the ends of the time!
Thank you! Appreciate it, she's the girl I plan on spending my life with
Ok, so the strings sound really good, but the entire beat is a bit repetitive, as well as that, the brass isn’t exactly the best made, the parts with the staccato sound wrong and doesn’t has too much space between each staccato. As well as that, the drums also sound a bit too loud, Particularthe hi hats, but then again, that’s a thing in a lot of trap songs.
Though this is a good experimental song with orchestral parts, I know you don’t use those often.
At the firstly That’s how it was intended, secondly, about the loud mix, yes, I gave it saturation and don’t tell me, these are all the necessary tools for rap from Nexus. Well, okay, thanks for not passing by)
Cute! Definitely something for fishing game OST! Good job!
thank you!
I couldn’t have missed that much of your uploads…
…
Right?
*Dies from seeing all the fucking uploads you did 💀”
Oh, you missed the worst of it, ahahahahaha
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