No criticism I can think of because this is pretty good! But one question, why is it marked as “Miscellaneous” this is obviously DnB (DrumNBass)
No criticism I can think of because this is pretty good! But one question, why is it marked as “Miscellaneous” this is obviously DnB (DrumNBass)
didnt wanna full label as dnb since it is artcore, which is weird genre with lot of dnb
influence in some areas of it, but also some other stuffs, so just put genre esque stuff in tags. artcore very broad "genre"
I dunno why, but I can see this in a Pokémon game, like some sort of temple.
My only criticism is the female voice around 153, it sounds a bit too loud and making the song sound bad during that moment, needs reverb or chorus. Another is that flute(?), it sounds off beat, maybe that was intentional? everything else falls into place to make some weird but cool music!
Yeah I could see that. I had the same issue with the vocal at that part. Too loud and dry. I'll fix it next time I work on this. The flute feeds into a heavy octave up delay, so that's where the off beat notes are coming from. Maybe I'll tone that down a little too. Thanks for a 5 and the good input. <: )
Gotten into lofi music eh? This does sound good! Really like the piano, but the best part about this is definitely the bass guitar… good job!
Thank you! Yes i tried to make a lo-fi again
WHAT THE HELL!? Usually not into lyrics, but this is amazing! Why is it so poorly rated!?
Beats me! I appreciate the support!
Not bad! Good job as always… so this is artcore?
Thanks! Maybe, lol
Warstyle, the idea is very good, but the song to propose could be better.
Mixing is the main problem, along with the off key piano, the drums are also not exactly well mixed either. That weird synth also doesn’t go along with the war vibe, it just sound off and just crappy in general. I will give you this, the bass is probably the best part of the song, the dirtiness of it really contributes to the so called war vibe. Hope you found my review helpful!
Score: 3.8/5 stars, Not the worse, but can definitely be improved.
The piano isn't "out of tune" it's probably the other synths that make it sound "out of tune" + ur ears might lying to you cause the piano doesn't sound "outta tune" to me. +, it's just a name, it don't have to give a "war vibe". thx for the criticism tho
Well, aren’t you classic! I remember our dying breath… good to see your still at it, I think we both have been getting better at music!
Congrats on frontpage!
Thanks! Still writing, always will 👊
I like the synth lead used in this! Good job man!
Thanks :D
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