Amazing work as always! If only you made this when I was dying from allergies!🤧
Amazing work Wilidacious! The collab is doing pretty well as some news to tell you!
Amazing work as always! If only you made this when I was dying from allergies!🤧
Amazing work Wilidacious! The collab is doing pretty well as some news to tell you!
haha, thank you! have you tried nettle leaf? i take it in the spring, either via tea or exteact and it really helps! what is this news you speak of?!
Not bad, though I do have a few suggestions. Many of the instruments come a bit too suddenly , such as the choir and that transition scratch at 0:56, and the metallic glitch beats also are a bit too loud. Makes sense you would be a bit rusty hence you been gone for a bunch of days, though I’m in absolute love with the beat itself! Good job!
Maybe. And Hi, dud:
It has potential. The guitar at some points during the more up beat parts is off key, and the pan flute is a bit too choppy for my liking. Sometimes the rhythm of the instruments don’t go well either, and it feels a bit rushed, if I am correct, then I’d recommend spending more time on it, but hey, your still in practice! You’re doing great! I look forward to more, let me know so i can review you again! :D
I wouldn't say that the guitar is off beat but rather the other instruments are since the guitar is the foundation of the track. This composition started out as a solo guitar song and then the VST instruments were added. But you are correct in amusing that it's rushed compared to my previous submission for AIM.
It’s very majestic, though at some points the strings are a bit choppy and don’t sound well. But either wise, a very straightforward piece that fits well with the image!
Edit: Practice is key! I’m not perfect either! Just check out my song odd house for example! It needs work, but it’s fun to listen to! Thanks for understanding, @Flamadour
Thanks for the review and kind words. And yes the strings are a bit choppy, I'm still getting used to utilising VST Instruments in my compositions. I mostly improvised the backing strings and wasn't sure how long to hold the notes for. Hopefully with more practice I'll get better at implementing them in future compositions.
Wish it was longer, but it sounds good!
Thanks!
Lovely as always, I also agree with @g2961! Your gonna get frontpaged again!
thank you as always!
Yo preds, you mind I use this for something? I’ll credit you!
as long as you credit me and the song, go for it :)
Really good! I can tell your getting better, though why can I hear my song Metro City taxi service in this as well?… maybe it’s the sax
Might be coincidence, tho I got more inspired in "Ladyfingers" from Herb Albert (kinda)
Pretty cool AIM submission! I can’t wait to hear all the awesome music AIM will give!
(btw, since this is lofi, I’d go with Hip Hop/Olskool genre rather then miscellaneous)
Thank you! I don't really get the hang of using the NG genres yet XD
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