A very odd trance song! But lovely!
I do like the piano and the strings are pretty well placed! Reminds me sort of like a waiting room or title screen!
A very odd trance song! But lovely!
I do like the piano and the strings are pretty well placed! Reminds me sort of like a waiting room or title screen!
Yeah, that's pretty much the vibe. Just meant to be relaxing and chill. If it puts you in a trance, it can't be that odd to call it Trance. :D
Love the snares in this one! Piano is also pretty neat!
Haven’t seen you since last year!…
What a cute tune! I love the chiptune aspects of it! It kinda reminds me of theFatrat!
Sorry for being a century late to the party, but this is some really good stuff… I also may be planning to bring back an old song from 2023 that I made soon ;)
i know; right?!
the new year kinda just snuck in through the back door and is staring at me uncomfortably [it's making me uncomfortable]
*2025 drank all my kombucha
**2025 also said we're all going back to using Tandys
I’m still here… I remember you man…
I don’t know if you remember me, but it’s been a while hasnt it… your probably not even gonna respond… but if you see this, just know, i still know who you are…
I’m glad we were able to meet eachother on geometry dash… miss you man <3
Edit: it hasn’t even been that long yet for me it feels like years XD
Hey, just curious, how long have you been making music?
3 years, lol
Ah, so this is your first song… a lot better than mine. Though it does feel off sometimes ngl.
OMG who actually listens to these songs‽
Btw the off feeling is caused by me playing the tune and then quantizating it, leaving some notes off-beat.
So you’re asking me to shit on your new stuff here huh… alright, I’ll give you the extreme criticism, but you asked for it. So don’t tell me I’m “bullying” or being unreasonable when this is what you asked for.
Very basic instrumentation, needs a ton of reverb, it’s also a very quiet song that could use compression. Mix is needing of a ton of work, many of the instruments don’t sound right. Mastering is minimal, many instruments heard could be better with Param EQ or Graphic EQ. Transitions aren’t that great, and it feels like it’s constantly changing, switching songs even. I will admit 1:36 is kinda fire, but the guitar felt very cliche before and even during it after you listen to it for a while. Super orchestra hits are not mixed enough to make this sound any nice. Chiptune after the orchestra hits is beyond weird and unfitting. The “dubstep” I’m just gonna say it… isn’t even dubstep, it’s just a synth bass looped in a melody. I do like the pad with the “dubstep” it seriously fits. Then it changes to the keyboard which does sound pretty good. It seemed to get better at the end at 2:20, with the guitar mixed with the kicks, and everything seemed to actually pretty well together, it’s just a bit minimal… the rest needs tons of work done on it. I will tell you this, melodies are improving, so you are improving.
Listen, I did what you asked, I shat on the song, going with my honest opinion ON EVERYTHING! But to be fair, I’m not the best, the best reviewer you can meet is someone by the username of @Taintedlogic, which you can find on Newgrounds. you could ask him to review this song, and he’ll give you a complex, but an EXTREMELY accurate and reasonable review. He doesn’t shit on the song, like you’ve asked me to, and he’s 100% honest, whilst also not being a nitpicker. But be warned, if you can’t take criticism, I wouldn’t recommend asking him, he’s there to give advice, but it’s up to you to accept it.
So you admit that rating this lower than you did for my first song is unreasonable, when I siad "shit on it" I didn't mean actually shit on it I ment to give me [GOOD] advice, my mistake. No offense but your advice is about as good as month expired milk.
Not bad man! Seems a bit too extended, but overall not bad man! Good work!
Thanks! I agree with you, maybe intro and drops were too long.
(Eats candy cane burger… it tastes disgusting)
Yo! You have ng! That’s sick bro! Found you from Mjs1, (vulturrent)
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