Very cool ideas! It’s pretty cool, though it’s really only gone to three places for me, so don’t worry about it being all over.
The transitions between the “places” are non existent, and could use a cymbal, or a riser, or something to make it flow better. The melody is really nice, and it reminds me sorta of indie music! Bass is great here, though it’s effective at best at the beginning. And a thing you should try making is an extension of the ending, it’s my favorite part! Though in this context, you’re right, it doesn’t fit, but it should definitely be made into a full song!
Pretty fire ngl! You seem like a very interesting music artist! Keep it up! :D