YOOO, another member of the 24 clan!? Let’s goooooo!
it’s a bit on the repetitive side, and the kicks are a bit loud, I would recommend adding some attack to make the drums less hard hitting, it’s a method I’ve always used, but first try adding more instruments, that could fix it. Speaking of the instruments, this piece is very minimal, and as I said, I feel there could be more instrument variety, the same instruments get boring after a while. There also seems to be too much filter on the snare I noticed, I actually would probably make the snare slightly more hard hitting!
something I do like about this track is the vibe, you definitely made something I haven’t heard a million times already XD. It’s actually really catchy and uses a lot of instruments to tell a sort of story! The synths are nostalgic, another cool factor in the song!
Great work! Keep up the good work!