Another absolute banger from the album. This one actually gave me tears when I was in a tough time… it’s a truly amazing masterpiece, obviously the best in the album.
Another absolute banger from the album. This one actually gave me tears when I was in a tough time… it’s a truly amazing masterpiece, obviously the best in the album.
glad that my music can be of help through tough times <3 thanks!
Not bad, some of the vocals sound weird, but that’s expected on the first turn of vocaloid. Synths and guitar sound really well, sometimes the mixing gets a bit muddy and all over the place during the more upbeat areas. Overall mixing is well done, though leveling could be improved, the synth and such kinda block out the lyrics, and the lyrics themselves sound gibberish.
Good first attempt at vocaloid! Nice work!
I’d recommend adding some reverb to many of the instruments such as the string in the more empty parts of the song. Melodies are pretty well made, possibly my favorite part of the song are the melodies, a lot of catchy melodies. Drums are also a bit dry and empty, as well as too much volume in the track.
I’d recommend adding more better transitions, even a simple cymbal can do wonders for music like this, but I think the biggest problem is reverb, you always want to have some decay in the instruments when it comes to orchestral instruments. As I’ve said earlier, the melodies are extraordinarily catchy, it just needs to have better transitions cause I feel like there are multiple songs in one here.
Could use work, but hey, for someone who’s just beginning, you’re doing good! Keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback! I enjoy learning from my mistakes. I will take reverb into consideration. For the second half, I changed the speed and key of the music.
Beautifully made! Great work my dude!
I genuinely can’t criticize it that all, perfect transitions, beautiful atmosphere, I guess MAYBE the synths are a bit overdramatic, BUT WOW!
This actually really amazing to listen to I will not lie at all. Great work!
Not bad man!
I like the instrumentation! Synths are cute though they have some very odd melodies compared to the drums. The rock guitar is also a bit on the odd side with all the chord transitions, sometimes longer notes are better for the job! It’s also an uncompressed, but it’s still sounds pretty well, maybe add some more hard hitting compression on the drums and synth.
Sounds well! I can hear both themes in this in a really good way! Great job, good luck in round 2!
NGMC score: 4.3/5
General score: 4.3/5
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I love the sweet tune of this! It’s very peaceful, even with the guitar part! Really nice work man!
thank you!
I bet this collab has happened before.
Honestly, despite its calm feel, it’s definitely got the racing aspect, the ice aspect is also really relevant. The instruments are very well made and perfectly placed, I especially love the French sounding instruments (what is it called?)
Overall I have nothing to criticize, maybe there is some panning issues but it really depends at this point.
NgMC score: 5/5
General score: 5/5
Thank you! I'm glad you find it relevant to the theme :D The French instrument is likely the accordion - it's one of my favorites.
I can hear the frontpage from here XD!
A lot of interesting approaches, I love the cool amount of basses and the risers going along with the DNB. The drums are also pretty well compressed and mixed, soemthing I’ve seen a lot of hardships in during this competition! It’s got both the ice and racing theme pretty well, and all the heavy aspects, along with the soothing orchestral are great!
NGMC score: 4.8/5
General score: 4.8/5
Not really too much of a racing atmosphere, but the ice theme is definitely there! I love how the melody goes, it’s very cutely mixed, a few awkward parts with the piano and other instruments, and it could use more bg sound effects, but pretty much there’s no much to criticize other then it’s not too much like a race :D really sweet work!
NGMC score: 2.5/5
General score: 4.8/5
Yeah at one point I just dropped the racing scheme and though "this sounds good enough, I won't try to force myself to fit both themes, it's fast enough I guess it could serve for a race", which yeah I still think so but I'm glad you said what you think
WOW THIS SHITS LONG
Congrats on the instantaneous frontpaged (Jealousy increased +1) XD
This is really good, synths fit like a glove, and many of the instrument choices are really good! Love the bassy acid sub bass thing at 3:01, I think I used a similar one in my song Mustard Gas. It’s a bit repetitive, but again, this is trance, I won’t hold it against you lol. Most of the transitions are really well done, but some could definitely have a better form, less awkward or jarring basically. The melodies are great! Mixing and mastering is pretty good, uniqueness isn’t that much, I’ve heard many like this before, but it’s still great! This also sounds more like a dancing theme than a racing theme, and the ice theme isn’t exactly there so uhhh, hmmm, I guess it’s kinda there with context lol XD. But still best of luck to you.
I like how you made it loud, but not so loud as it to become staticky and shit. Really well done and strong work, good luck to you!
NGMC score(btw, the competitors are the judges): 3.7/5 (most problems come from the lack of correct atmosphere and theme)
General score: 4.8/5
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