Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[AYA x Button Masher - Arcade Hit]

God I can’t wait to move from LMMS to Fl Studio so I can make this kind of stuff! T_T

Love the Sega bass! The entire song seems a bit too much on the high pass filter, we need some bass in the… bass… maybe it’s GarageBand? Or is it FL studio and I’m correct?. O_o. The chiptune is a bit weird at first, but you get used to it over time. Piano is actually goated wth, it’s my fave part of the song! It’s goes really well with the Sega bass. The voxy synth is a bit on the weird side with the bitcrushed percussion, it’s only until the chiptune comes it sounds fire.
Piano is a bit minimal after that, kicks are also a bit on the hard side in that area. I do like the Sega synth afterwards, sounds fire! The vocoder also really fits despite all the different styles of Sega music lol. The synth after that sounds a bit dissonant with the piano, clashing against it harshly.

I feel the biggest problem here is the transitioning, this sounds like a lot of songs in 1 audio file, rather then one large song, but overall, a lot of epic Sega madness and synths goodness that I can listen to for days. Epic work! :D

[JA!L]

Yessir yessir!

Ngl this shi fire as hell, I could critique the horrid drum mixing, but at that point it’s just a style XD ToT.

Perfection mi compadre

NotZec responds:

🤣🤣Thanks bro

[Jetstream-Dreams]

Congrats on getting your song in a video lol

Church bell is a bit on the jarring side, and I like how the synths are the most generic house/dance synths possible, but they are composed in a very unique way, along with the vox synth at 1:04. That vox synth actually could be a bit higher pitched, and maybe turned into a plucky melody, I’m doing something similar for my next song, it’s my best way to use it!
The pad is also really fitting, and it sounds generic, but isn’t! (I’m sorry I’m saying generic so much, I consider uniqueness a factor that isn’t critiqued enough lol)

Some jarring instruments and horrid pitches, but it’s really cool song overall! Well produced, and well composed! Nice work!

Asteriskisfat responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Reality]

YOOO, another member of the 24 clan!? Let’s goooooo!

it’s a bit on the repetitive side, and the kicks are a bit loud, I would recommend adding some attack to make the drums less hard hitting, it’s a method I’ve always used, but first try adding more instruments, that could fix it. Speaking of the instruments, this piece is very minimal, and as I said, I feel there could be more instrument variety, the same instruments get boring after a while. There also seems to be too much filter on the snare I noticed, I actually would probably make the snare slightly more hard hitting!

something I do like about this track is the vibe, you definitely made something I haven’t heard a million times already XD. It’s actually really catchy and uses a lot of instruments to tell a sort of story! The synths are nostalgic, another cool factor in the song!
Great work! Keep up the good work!

PallasAthena24 responds:

Thanks! I'll try and improve it for sure!

Edit: I mixed in some new elements to indeed avoid some repitition. I didn't overdo it as I somehow quite like how this song just gets you in that virtual and surreal vibe (not sure how to put it) I compressed the kick a little and made the snares slighly louder. They now stand out just a little less, so that they mix better with the rest of the song. If you want you can listen again, hopefully you like it better this way. I think I do.

[LyingFears - Dreams]

It’s a bit on the generic side but it also has some areas where there are different melodies then what would normally be there. Overall the mixing and production is good, and I have a feeling this is gonna get frontpaged since they judge based off production, and not uniqueness. Though, I would actually recommend trying to change something up about these kinds of tracks, something only YOU do lol.

In fact, there might actually be already a part, that transition with r2d2 and the guy responding to it is by far my favorite part! Maybe that’s your thing, transitions! No wonder the transitions are so good here lol

Cool stuff, a bit repetitive as well, but still well made!

LyingFears responds:

Thanks for the feedback!! and yeah I will agree that some parts are repetitive and I will do my best to improve :3 also that guy responding to r2d2 was me >:D

[can it please be over?]

Production: 9/10
Composition: 9/10
Unique: 10/10
Vocals: 9/10
…

You are one of us Overscore… no less.
G2961, a generic, yet professional sounding musician, who goes traditional methods…
CF24, musician who breaks rules of sound, despite his low quality, and unorthodox methods, manages to tell a story unlike most.

You did both… you are better then us both… congrats, you did it.

OVERSCORE responds:

I don’t really compare myself to other musicians, especially not THE G2961 (THE MUSICIAN. THE MYTH. THE LEGEND.) but thank you for the heartfelt review CF!! I’m thankful that I get to be one of you amazing musicians.

[SICKO!]

Congrats on the frontpaged! Yeah! I liked it, doesn’t fit the name much, but that’s due to the synth.

Vocal chops sound pretty epic, I’m a big fan of them, the amount of variety is also good, but it also sounds generic at points. Overall it’s really well made and deserves frontpage! Congrats!

[NGAP Doom Collab]

@Cyberdevil… you know what time it is ;)

[grotto]

Truly a beaut I must say! Fun fact, my first ever song ever published was known as Mossy Grotto… and it was terrible XD!

A few off sync pieces of the synth, but this is amazing nonetheless! Great work!

trevor8 responds:

hey; i like mossy grotto :)

[Get Down N' GO!]

The baby crying meme ToT. And the GAEEE meme T_T

I love a lot of the samples you used in there, and grats on the frontpage!
It’s better then a lot of breakcore songs I’ve heard, it actually uses orch hits, something I never knew could go together. It’s really catchy, and it’s more breakbeat with breakcore drums then it is breakcore lol. Really neat stuff…

You should’ve added the Pierre meme >:(. Ay Pierre you wanna come out here!

Cheeming-Bepis responds:

Ay pierre isn’t on here, though that door open sound that will makes is lol
No gae or baby screaming (that was pierre lol) meme on here though that gives me ideas that i should never have ;P