Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TaintedLogic / 79 / A100]

Back in 2012 it was moreso nostalgic? Interesting! Thanks for your answer!

Aalasteir responds:

Thank you for your question! Creeperforce!

[~夜空 Yozora~]

Very uniquely structured track, it sounds very experimental! The synths chops at the beginning give JRPG horror or indie game horror vibes. The atmosphere is definitely there, the bassy sounds are put into a sort of organized chaos, which is jarring, though I feel that was a plan there. The melody goes from horror game to some weird dark hardcore at 1:23, which I feel greatly contrasts the last vibe, it’s sorta like putting a hardcore track in a horror indie game.

The last bit was… something O_o.

Ok but for real, in terms of uniqueness, I think you got that covered XD. Production isn’t that great, but atmosphere sounds pretty tense, damn, you did a good job. Just needs better composition and structure, and maybe better samples.

(Currently dying from blood loss on a Japanese school hallway)

maysiie responds:

Yo thanks

[life on earth]

Beautiful work once again trev! Reminds me of Wall E, loved that movie when I was younger!

trevor8 responds:

haha; it's been ages since i saw wall-e!
thank you so much, my friend!

[The Angel's Despair]

Really cool stuff! I’m in absolute love with the violin and strings. The guitar also fits really well with the track, I suppose the drums could be more on beat and more intense, it sounds low quality actually. The vocals sound really good as well! Desperation is truly visible there! Nice work!

Thomxs responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback and i'm glad you enjoyed the track!
For the drums, I'm saving up for a good drum plugin (VST) so my tracks will sound even better, it's still in the works :p (as of right now i'm using a stock plug-in from my music software) but i'm glad it didn't completely ruin the listening experience and i'll try my best to make them sound better!

-H!ku/Thomxs

[Shatt3rium - You Will Be Free]

There is a lot to be improved on this song. The vocals are really well made, but there are a lot of dissonance in your track, a lot of clashing instruments, and overall the whole song seems to be thrown together in some weird mashup, 1:08 for example would have worked if the drums also became faster. There is also way too much distortion and compression in the drums, and the song itself isn’t really color bass, moreso it’s just colorful notes played in a rhythm. There drums and melodies go off beats quite a few times in a not so good way, like it’s slight to the left. The mixing is also needing improvement, some instruments in the more bass kick parts are barely able to be heard over the kicks, you need hard kicks, not distorted and compressed to the max kicks. The final melody is also really off and just doesn’t sound good in general. There is also that looooooong pause at the end, it goes for 30 something seconds!

One of the best parts of the song is the choice in pads and some of the synths, they are very chilling and fit well! You also don’t have any real repetitiveness in the track, and transitioning is decent! You’ve got some ideas, but you need to learn how to make better melodies and tonal identification, and just not amp the shit out of the kicks.
Stay at it! Just gotta learn more.

Shatt3rium responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I will work on my mistakes in the future and will try to promise my projects to reach a new level ;)

[Pilasity - Emeny Side]

A lot of dissonant instruments and a lot of clashing between lower and higher frequencies . It’s also a bit repetitive in some areas. You definitely got some ideas! I like the bassline and many of the melodys, transitions are also pretty cool! There is some off key notes with the synths, but again, I can see a possible structure here!
Just keep going man! This is a good starting structure!

Pilasity responds:

Thanks for the information, I still need to figure out the details in the future

[Freezing Frown]

Pretty beautiful music! I can’t really find any way to critique it, it sounds exactly how it should! In some parts of the song the strings sound more like vgm strings then actual strings with the chorus. But still, really great stuff!

BizarreDistance responds:

Thanks! it's old, made in 2013 just haven't put it anywhere.

[SHATTER]

Me when I got a job as an assassin and found a can of transparent paint:

ADR3-N responds:

What would you even do with that?! I used to write with transparent markers on my wall when I was a kid, which was hell to wash off

[Armageddon]

The track is really dissonant and WHAT THE FUCK IS THE PHONE ABOUT THAT SHIT HAS ME DYING XDXDXDXD!

As you said, the mixing could be better, but when I first got to Newgrounds, I made NOTHING LIKE THIS! You’re really talented! And with enough practice, you’ll get better. But as I was saying about the dissonance, many of the tracks are clashing with eachother and the strings at the start sounded really offkey. And the synth didn’t sound right in the final part. All it takes is practice, hanks for giving my track critique :3

LDsStuff responds:

Thank you, maybe you could listen to some of my other tracks and give some critique on those too? (Right now I’m trying to fix this track)

[Grim, Grim, Gallows]

Soundfonts for all I know are allowed, so I think you’re good lol.

GoldShinx responds:

that's a massive relief, thank you!