I love when it’s super cold then the sun just shines on your back and your cheek. Very sweet chune
I love when it’s super cold then the sun just shines on your back and your cheek. Very sweet chune
thank you! that's exactly what i was thinking :)
Great work my dood!
Thanks mate :)
Glad to see your still around!
Love this one! Some parts sound a bit strange and many transitions could be improved, but many also transition quite well! Also love how you were able to combine industrial and Congo stuff! Reminds me of a cinematic chase in a jungle temple! Epic! I’m not sure if this is your “best” but it’s definitely in the top ten best X-500 songs! It’s also super long, and it’s impossible to get bored of! In fact, some parts at the end remind me of Skewed Paths by Waterflame! You definitely cooked with this one! Great work!
Either wise, how have you been? I’ve been doing pretty well! I’m trying to get into contact with some friends I haven’t talked to in a while lol.
Hi! Im good is too! Thanks for check
When you realize it actually sounds likes Pom Pom Pom
Really amazing! I like the clever name, not sure if that was coincidental or on purpose lol
thanks! (most definitely was on purpose, haha)
Sounds pretty cool man! Nice work!
Transitions could be improved, and some instruments sounds a bit too loud. I suppose your new to making music?
Thank you! I've been making music for quite some time now, but I've only started really trying to learn mixing and mastering recently.
A very odd trance song! But lovely!
I do like the piano and the strings are pretty well placed! Reminds me sort of like a waiting room or title screen!
Yeah, that's pretty much the vibe. Just meant to be relaxing and chill. If it puts you in a trance, it can't be that odd to call it Trance. :D
Haven’t seen you since last year!…
What a cute tune! I love the chiptune aspects of it! It kinda reminds me of theFatrat!
Sorry for being a century late to the party, but this is some really good stuff… I also may be planning to bring back an old song from 2023 that I made soon ;)
i know; right?!
the new year kinda just snuck in through the back door and is staring at me uncomfortably [it's making me uncomfortable]
*2025 drank all my kombucha
**2025 also said we're all going back to using Tandys
Hey, just curious, how long have you been making music?
3 years, lol
Ah, so this is your first song… a lot better than mine. Though it does feel off sometimes ngl.
OMG who actually listens to these songs‽
Btw the off feeling is caused by me playing the tune and then quantizating it, leaving some notes off-beat.
So you’re asking me to shit on your new stuff here huh… alright, I’ll give you the extreme criticism, but you asked for it. So don’t tell me I’m “bullying” or being unreasonable when this is what you asked for.
Very basic instrumentation, needs a ton of reverb, it’s also a very quiet song that could use compression. Mix is needing of a ton of work, many of the instruments don’t sound right. Mastering is minimal, many instruments heard could be better with Param EQ or Graphic EQ. Transitions aren’t that great, and it feels like it’s constantly changing, switching songs even. I will admit 1:36 is kinda fire, but the guitar felt very cliche before and even during it after you listen to it for a while. Super orchestra hits are not mixed enough to make this sound any nice. Chiptune after the orchestra hits is beyond weird and unfitting. The “dubstep” I’m just gonna say it… isn’t even dubstep, it’s just a synth bass looped in a melody. I do like the pad with the “dubstep” it seriously fits. Then it changes to the keyboard which does sound pretty good. It seemed to get better at the end at 2:20, with the guitar mixed with the kicks, and everything seemed to actually pretty well together, it’s just a bit minimal… the rest needs tons of work done on it. I will tell you this, melodies are improving, so you are improving.
Listen, I did what you asked, I shat on the song, going with my honest opinion ON EVERYTHING! But to be fair, I’m not the best, the best reviewer you can meet is someone by the username of @Taintedlogic, which you can find on Newgrounds. you could ask him to review this song, and he’ll give you a complex, but an EXTREMELY accurate and reasonable review. He doesn’t shit on the song, like you’ve asked me to, and he’s 100% honest, whilst also not being a nitpicker. But be warned, if you can’t take criticism, I wouldn’t recommend asking him, he’s there to give advice, but it’s up to you to accept it.
So you admit that rating this lower than you did for my first song is unreasonable, when I siad "shit on it" I didn't mean actually shit on it I ment to give me [GOOD] advice, my mistake. No offense but your advice is about as good as month expired milk.
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