This is judging by what I think you were aiming for… ambient music is tough to review with a lack of context, so correct me if I’m mistaken!
You don’t exactly want to make anything too hard hitting in an ambient track like this, maybe add less compression or decline the velocity of the percussion at the start of the track, which becomes flawed around 0:10. I would’ve sound much better if it stayed at the same attack level as 0:07. I love the use of atmosphere and the way synth is used in this. The sudden bass hits also fit well with the entirety of the atmosphere, at 1:03 it gets a bit too much of a hopeful pad added into the mix, you want to have the song stay dark. Sorry for jumping, but at 0:23 it’s also a bit minimal, even for an ambient song, maybe add something louder, like those bass hits, but less serious.
Definitely not bad for only a week of experience, a lot better then what I was doing with only a weeks experience. But I get the image of being in a sort of chamber, you know sorta like the ones in the matrix, and it’s just the camera zooming into it, revealing the horrors of the unconscious victims of… something… aliens perhaps. ovo
Nice work man! Hope you keep it up, and please tell me if you meant to do something intentionally here, I’m just going by my own aesthetics of an ambient track. I’ll even change the rating if you can describe what you were going for.
Other then that, have a nice night and keep forth!