Creeperforce24's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Were where you on that fate-ful day? "Battle VS: The Reference Girl"]

The chiptune sounds very dissonant in the track, and isn’t well tuned, and overall it just doesn’t sound right. The mixing could also be a bit more improved, maybe adding more compression to the bass. There’s also that weird gap in the later middle of the song, I feel it’s better to just put that gap as a transition, like a reverse cymbal! Something I do like is the drum melody, and overall the melody at the end, it sounds natural! The drums are pretty fitting for this song as well, it’s mainly the instruments and tuning that’s not too great.
What key is this song in? Cause it’s better to have a certain key if the song doesn’t have one, that’s a way to get rid of the dissonance, as well as using EQ and possibly just different instruments.
Btw, I found you through @Overscore, and tbh, I might be taking your side since he seems to have made the rude reply, and maybe he was just baiting, I’m not sure. Wealth doesn’t determine a musician (though it can help)
Keep up the good work on whatever you make! :D
(Why do I have a feeling there’s an inside joke that I’m not getting XD)

happyghosts responds:

Thank you for your response though I dont quite agree with all your points.
The song is in a scale, the phrygian scale of b minor, and maybe its just your ears because I dont hear any dissonance.
BTW the "chiptune" that I think youre referring to is actually a GM clav. anyway.

I sort of agree that there could be a better transition to the end part, I ran out of ideas a bit.
It's cool that you like the end melody, when I made it it didnt feel much different than composing the rest of the song, just without the other instruments mostly, so maybe you're right that the bass needs to be improved. The lead and clav sound great in combination and thats sort of what I built this version of the song on.
Also there's no inside jokes, I think thats the worst kind of humor. A lot of the time my song titles are references to semi-obscure stuff, or just meant to be silly.

[THE REALLY LONG SONG COLLAB]

@yawnmorning

This song is LONGER then summer vacation ToT

Slimetok responds:

theres 104 days of summer vacation

[Chill Space Adventures]

Congrats on the frontpage!

It’s a bit on the repetitive side, and the synth sounds a little dissonant at the beginning. I like the more calm synth at around 1:15, the bass around the same time sounds a bit loud, but overall not bad. The synths arp at around 1:49 sound a lot like a song known as Skyless, it’s really neat! It’s still a bit repetitive throughout the song, and has a drum beat that is really reminiscent of hip hop tracks. A bit of a sudden and not really well made transition to a HPF(High Pass Filter) version of the previous song, that seems to come back again.
Big fan of the new drums at 3:40, very dusty, but dusty in this case is good! The beat gets a little boring at around 4:20, try and add something new, like a different melody, different instrument, or possibly some radio transmission sfx! You kinda just made it go for longer then needed, that really it.

At 4:55 it gets interesting with the cutesy synth, really big fan of it! And it’s extended perfectly! I like how the song does go into bitcrush, but I’d recommend turning it down a little in the process!
Decent work, could use some variety, and leveling improvements, definitely a cool idea of a song tho! Keep it up, and congrats on the frontpage again!

Noltrollroll responds:

Thanks for the review! I will admit, the song goes on for longer than intended, but like i said, it was an old flp that i just uploaded without fixing some things lol XD.

[w/o u]

Not bad! But the drums are a bit on the compressed side, it also feels really empty at the beginning. At 1:01 we have that weird dissonant melody, it definitely sounds better with the reverb, but on its own it just sounds awkward and not that well in the song. The solo is probably the best part of the song, with the synth just needing some reverb and the drums seem to get better as the song goes out. Keep it up, keep experimenting! I can definitely hear the emotional side, though of course it can always be stronger :)

dijek responds:

Thanks for the feedback!!

Just made some adjustments, let me know how it sounds now!

[Return To The Whorl]

A seriously lovely track! I’m in love with how all the instruments are made, the length is long, but good, and the melodies are almost psychedelic! I feel like this is taking me on a journey through a universe where nothing makes sense, but yet finding sense to it. The keyboard is cutesy, and yet it fits in so well! I’m also in love with the strings, as an orchestral fan, I seriously can’t get over it, it just sounds so pristine.
Though of course there are mishaps, the drums seem to kick in a bit too loudly and suddenly at first in my opinion, and some parts of the song are kinda repetitive. But overall! This is some good stuff! I love the mysterious atmosphere, it just feels so peaceful! Nice work man!

Halindir responds:

Your words are exceedingly kind, and your criticism fair. Thank you

[INTERNET!]

The name fits completely well! Love the bass, and the synths are really good as well. Drum kicks might be a bit on the loud side, but mixing overall sounds pretty well made! I love how this basically accurate describes the internet, memes, lobby music, and THA NETHA

sagelapis responds:

Thanks!!! :3

[Tim Gordon & Bad Reputation - Your Move (ft. Cassidy Mackenzie) [Extended Mix]]

It’s very well produced, but not very “original”, I’ve heard many songs like this before.
Don’t get me wrong, it IS an original work, but in terms of future house it’s not much different then others.
I do like the gritty bass, that’s always been a part of future house I do really like. I don’t got much comments, but gave you tried adding orchestral to your music? It can give a certain feel and variety!

BadReputationMusic responds:

This was made before we started branching out into our own style, We eventually moved into making our own recognizable style which you can find in our Collaboration with Dirty Palm called "Spellbound".
Even with that said we definitely appreciate the feedback and we thank you for listening!

[Old School Mellow]

Always love listening to your stuff when I find it, it’s always weird or absurd in some way. The repeated kick is a bit too loud, and honestly the song could go better without it. I still love the song though, reminds me of looking over a hut on an island in a lake next to a bursting city. Nice work!

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I don't get much satisfaction from making normal music, so I always lean towards the odd. I agree the kicks weren't mixed as well as I would have liked but the only thing I had to work with was a mix-down track, because this was actually part of a live set I did recorded to analog tape many years ago.

[Why did I make this]

You make a FEW songs like this… but on my YouTube… it’s a series >:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cExfFjy826A&list=PLQggkhSrt_fUxUV-sm2IfR3JZI3eRrG8z

(Btw this is probably my second fave now lol)

Neon-Skies responds:

Haha, should I post it to youtube
XDDDDDD

[neptune]

The ice giant! If we ever get technological enough, I’m listening to this while wearing a fur coat sitting on an icy rock on Neptune. I also love how long it is! Really sweet stuff man! Keep it up!

trevor8 responds:

haha; it's long because it's s l o o o o w
(tempo's like 71 i think) ;)